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Zilch

by BarrettBenedict


If you count to ten
Then count to three
You’re thirteen steps ahead of me
But if you count infinity
I’m closer than you’ll ever be

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Sun Sep 17, 2006 9:19 am
Elizabeth says...



this was deep, I liked it... and it as worded beautifully... and it was deep... (I love using that word.)




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Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:43 am
David Guinness wrote a review...



For what it is, the poem serves its purpose well. The phrasing and syllables flow comfortably, though I'm not sure whether I would prefer this verse with or without punctuation... I'll have to think on that.

I look forward to reading some more of your poetry!





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