Published September 17, 2006
If you count to ten
Then count to three
You’re thirteen steps ahead of me
But if you count infinity
I’m closer than you’ll ever be
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this was deep, I liked it... and it as worded beautifully... and it was deep... (I love using that word.)
For what it is, the poem serves its purpose well. The phrasing and syllables flow comfortably, though I'm not sure whether I would prefer this verse with or without punctuation... I'll have to think on that.
I look forward to reading some more of your poetry!