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Elizabeth

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deathly Beauty

    Newly remastered and digitized for your enjoyment. So... enjoy... or something along those lines. I hope this is somewhat better than the original... or something. Any repitition NOW??? HUH??? :P

    Dec 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ronko's Rock Candy - Writing challenge 12/05

    Sam outta like this one! Haha, I got a kind laugh out of this, Although... I'm pretty sure my teeth are highly offended by that now :P

    Dec 14, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Jack (don't hate me)

    This was very beautiful... Hmm... I do often wonder about the insides of mouths as well :P

    Dec 13, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Away in a Cave

    OOH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I died laughng! Did he eat the lice afterwards? AHAHAHAHA!!! A great relief from reality thank you friend! lol!

    Dec 12, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Death of William Mountfort

    It said Mountford on several different accounts... I got confused.

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Here i am

    Yeah... does need work. Too short to be a song, but too long to be a cute little tune, all in my opinion of course...

    Dec 9, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Why do you want to do this?

    He slapped her hard across the mouth, breaking her jaw. Hard slap. Kinda sick.... VERY sick... More paragraphs needed.... yeah...

    Dec 8, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: "Woman-creature, show me crimson."

    Too beautiful for words. Yet too wordy to be beautiful... No, I take that back! My sin of the day: I Envy You

    Dec 8, 2005
  • Other » General, General Re: The Young Puppy

    Sounded young... Sounded innocent... Sounds like I might not get into it... But it does sound pretty cute!

    Dec 8, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Friends ...

    Aww. *huggles* Hey buddy! I missed you! ... At least... I think you are my buddy, buddy!

    Dec 8, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Eulogy to a Forgotten Person

    I really liked this poem, will people still comment on this PLEASE?!

    Dec 7, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: he plays with fire

    Oh sow that's what that meant...! I was wondering what umop meant! That was very brilliantly planned! Oh so original! I loved that! This was a very interesting poem... Great ...

    Dec 7, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter Raven Song

    I liked it. It rhymed. Had a smooth rythem. Was about a raven. (I'm dark like that) Very good! It'd be great if you'd continue this but it's fine just ...

    Dec 7, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: *Still untitled*

    You really like my stuff that much? (It's been two months since last comment so it could be liked now....) Sorry if it isn't italics, I'm too lazy to click ...

    Dec 7, 2005
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A Deathly Christmas Parody

    Wow, a lot of comments.... Maybe I should parody a few more songs for this morbidly, yet, surprisingly "HAPPY" holiday.

    Dec 7, 2005


worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton