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Re: Deathly Beauty
Newly remastered and digitized for your enjoyment. So... enjoy... or something along those lines. I hope this is somewhat better than the original... or something. Any repitition NOW??? HUH??? :P
Dec 17, 2005 -
Re: Ronko's Rock Candy - Writing challenge 12/05
Sam outta like this one! Haha, I got a kind laugh out of this, Although... I'm pretty sure my teeth are highly offended by that now :P
Dec 14, 2005 -
Re: Jack (don't hate me)
This was very beautiful... Hmm... I do often wonder about the insides of mouths as well :P
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: Away in a Cave
OOH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I died laughng! Did he eat the lice afterwards? AHAHAHAHA!!! A great relief from reality thank you friend! lol!
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: The Death of William Mountfort
It said Mountford on several different accounts... I got confused.
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Here i am
Yeah... does need work. Too short to be a song, but too long to be a cute little tune, all in my opinion of course...
Dec 9, 2005 -
Re: Why do you want to do this?
He slapped her hard across the mouth, breaking her jaw. Hard slap. Kinda sick.... VERY sick... More paragraphs needed.... yeah...
Dec 8, 2005 -
Re: "Woman-creature, show me crimson."
Too beautiful for words. Yet too wordy to be beautiful... No, I take that back! My sin of the day: I Envy You
Dec 8, 2005 -
Re: The Young Puppy
Sounded young... Sounded innocent... Sounds like I might not get into it... But it does sound pretty cute!
Dec 8, 2005 -
Re: Friends ...
Aww. *huggles* Hey buddy! I missed you! ... At least... I think you are my buddy, buddy!
Dec 8, 2005 -
Re: A Eulogy to a Forgotten Person
I really liked this poem, will people still comment on this PLEASE?!
Dec 7, 2005 -
Re: he plays with fire
Oh sow that's what that meant...! I was wondering what umop meant! That was very brilliantly planned! Oh so original! I loved that! This was a very interesting poem... Great ...
Dec 7, 2005 -
Re: Winter Raven Song
I liked it. It rhymed. Had a smooth rythem. Was about a raven. (I'm dark like that) Very good! It'd be great if you'd continue this but it's fine just ...
Dec 7, 2005 -
Re: *Still untitled*
You really like my stuff that much? (It's been two months since last comment so it could be liked now....) Sorry if it isn't italics, I'm too lazy to click ...
Dec 7, 2005 -
Re: A Deathly Christmas Parody
Wow, a lot of comments.... Maybe I should parody a few more songs for this morbidly, yet, surprisingly "HAPPY" holiday.
Dec 7, 2005
