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Ronko's Rock Candy - Writing challenge 12/05

by Snoink


When your head starts to spin
And your mind gently bends
And you want to be obsessed
Without all that mess
And your teeth yearn to ache
With the sweetness of cake
Times ten
Then trrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry

RONKO'S ROCK CANDY!




Lol... that sucked.


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Mon Dec 19, 2005 9:07 am
Snoink says...



There's only one problem with that... I'm pretty sure the candy is as hard as rocks, and sticky too. :P




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Fri Dec 16, 2005 8:05 pm
Duskglimmer says...



*laughs* sounds like a great way to sing it!! *goes the Fred and George Weasley way and puts it to the tune of a funeral durge*

Anyways... getting back ontopic: I liked it. I want some Ronko's Rock Candy now...




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Fri Dec 16, 2005 6:25 am
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It's sort of like the Hogwarts school song. Pick a tune, and let's all sing together!




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Wed Dec 14, 2005 6:48 pm
Griffinkeeper says...



Uh... how does the song go? It was hard to sing along to.




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Wed Dec 14, 2005 2:11 am
Elizabeth says...



Sam outta like this one!

Haha, I got a kind laugh out of this, Although... I'm pretty sure my teeth are highly offended by that now :P





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