Elizabeth

Yeah I was glad I could help you turn it into a poem. Yeah, sometimes I feel like this with ... I don't know which name to address him by ...

You spelled shining and I think INTWINED wrong but honestly other than that. I'm pretty sure I see nothing else wrong. Nice line breaks. And It is a song, if ...

When you were partying all night long in my empty house, I was shaking in fear because I had to sleep with my gay friends in a same bunker. those ...

So you are Makailya Wallis or whatever? Like the main character? Yeah, it sounds very realistic... For me though, the plot moves too slow... because I like fast things. But ...

Your ex? You're too busy punching me to tell me anything anyway. Usually when I say wishing without a g or something I put a ' instead. ie wishin', wantin',. ...

OOH I LOVE GARFIELD. My friend had a stuffed one and I thought it was real until i went over. She told e I couldn't see it because it's tail ...

... It fel forced and I had lovely images of Jesus for some reason.... during the crusifiction or whatever (i'm not very religious). Anyway on the other hand: In your ...

This was honestly very beautiful and for once I paid attention to what you wrote becaus usually by this time I am in my "zone" I really loved this and ...

I like it all except for the first line "Hey, Ballerina" it sounds too much like those cheesy fifties movies where the girls are like, "hey, girlfriend!" other than that, ...

"I resort to waving our waiter over and ordering the cold corn chowder lemon bisque with peanuts and dill, an arugule Caesar salad and swordfish meat loaf with kiwi mustard, ...

You're tired of me saying it's good and nothing else but I'll say it anyway. It was good. It kept me reading although I had to stop to get some ...

I hated it. No, really. :^o 8-[ Regardless of the finesse, however, it kind of struck me as being...pointless - and the last stanza was too abrupt for my tastes. ...

This smile I wore Was merely a mask. Now it is permanent-- And my old face Is just a mask. Honestly, we know it was just a mask. Sorry just ...

... Wow... wow, this was deep... Man, Hunter, I don't want to say anything to mess anything up but, you seemed obsessed with this woman, the fallen angel, whos name ...

I loved it..... yeah, kinda what they say but otherwise it's a great piece... "You have a best friend but you start to out grow him and start to slip ...