Elinor

Hey! Thanks for reviewing. Unfortunately, a file failed to save so I actually wrote a fair bit past this point and lost it. It was for sure demotivating but I ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the review! It's a self-contained short script (no other parts). No answers on why Landon does this (that's for you to think about) but it's supposed to bring ...

Yeah that's totally fair on the intentional ambiguity regarding the situation of the statues, but as you noted, you can keep the rest in mind for revisions! :) Have a ...

Thanks so much for your time reading the script and watching! :)

Ahh, thank you so much! So, this was actually the first draft of a film we made. There were definitely some changes in the process... but give it a watch.

I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! I'll probably post little by little eventually. The novel is 18 chapters in all, plus an epilogue, so we'll see where we're ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking Charlotte as a narrator, and yes, I need to work more on imagery -- it's a fault of mostly being a screenwriter ...

Hi Plume! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thanks for all your comments! The script is about 18 pages right now. I'd like to keep it under 20 (ie = ...

Thanks for the review! At first I was going to say Mike killed her, but I thought it would be more true to life if he wasn%u2019t involved and this ...

Hi, you can do the @ sign and then my name. Thanks!

It's just the beginning. There's more to come! I can tag you in future parts if you'd like. :)

Thanks for your review! Yeah it was hard to copy/paste from my script and have the action not blend in with the dialogue. I%u2019ll try to fix it. Regarding the ...

Note: This review has been deleted
[deleted]

Ahhh got it! That makes sense. :)