Elinor

Hello there fairy_at_heart! Before I get to the nitpicks, I would just like to say one thing. The imagery in your poem was absolutely fantastic. I could almost feel the ...

Hey Kamas! This was great and definitely very creative. It's amazing what one can do with just a tiny bit of inspiration. I do have a few points to make, ...

Hey Eddie! I believe this is the very first thing I've reviewed of yours, but you didn't disappoint. This poem was very, very good. However, I only had one issue ...

Hello Napal! This story was just alright. I had a lot of questions when I first read it through, and there were a lot things that did not add up. ...

Wow, I can't believe that this is the very first work that you've posted on YWS! :D Anyway, you had a rather good start! A few main points: :arrow: Reading ...

Wow, Rascalover! I can't believe this! For a first time poet, you're very good. Maybe you just have a bit of that natural talent? ;) Anyway, onto the poem. I ...

Hey, alright story, except there were a ton of easily correctable errors, such as typos and grammar mistakes. Once you proofread them through, I'm sure that you'll catch them. A ...

Hey Kylan. This was quite good. It had a cool, creepy feel to it. Your imagery was fantastic, and I could definitely feel like I was there. However, there were ...

Hello there! I can taste winter in the air What part of winter does the narrator taste? The snowflakes, or the Christmas cookies? Winter usually isn't something that you taste, ...

Hello there El Finito! This was quite a good poem; I liked the message you were trying to create. However, in addition to your grammar mistakes, the poem didn't really ...

Hello there, fellow Hunger Games actress! :) Here is your review, as promised. It was a little boring at the start, but then it got better. Your descriptions fell into ...

Hey Shina! I remember reading the other parts of Dream Catcher , and this was very good. However, I have a few major problems with this piece. The Flow I ...

Hello Jayden. I really liked this poem; it was charming, mysterious, and it left me wanting more. It makes you wonder if the girl a person, a spirit or ghost. ...

Hello Cletus. This was very good, but what happened to your line breaks? This all one big block of text, which is bad for any kind of story. Now, onto ...

Wow, Sachiko. This is a beautiful piece of work. I really enjoyed your simple writing style, and the fact that you used little dialogue tags.The present-tense is quite artful, and ...