Elinor

Hi! So, this is quite an interesting story. There's a lot going on-you've got a sadistic killer who has a strange, lustful attraction the the girl he's murdering. It's very ...

Hi! You know, of all the poems I've read of yours so far, I think this is the best. I like that's it simple and fun. I just had two ...

Hi! So, I don't know what to think of this poem right now. To me, it seems like an outline of something that could be much, much better. Well, first ...

Hi Kara! So, I really liked the story! In a way it felt my own story feel more complete, like it filled in a lot of gaps, and I just ...

Hi Gal. I'm not exactly sure to critique this poem. It's certainly different, and the rhymes make it cute. Would it be a limerick, by any chance? Either way, I ...

Hi Lala! So, there were a few things I liked and a few things I didn't like about the story. It's a definite improvement over your first part! The issues ...

Hi Hannah! So, like Navita and Snoink, I found this really confusing. I think you've got a promising start with good characters, but it goes by way too quickly and ...

Hi Karina! My goodness, I think I'm in love with this story. It's so unbelievably compelling, and the edits made it ten times better; I liked how you were able ...

Hi! Thanks for critiquing my story! I thought I'd return the favor and critique yours. I understand that this is old, but if you want to improve this, there are ...

Hi! Okay, so you have a lot happening in this prologue! We're introduced to a creepy old theater and we learn a terrifying secret about it. However, you may have ...

Hi again, Rosey! There were only two major comments that I really had with this part. Firstly, I want to say that it is indeed a major, major improvement over ...

Hi Rosey! I didn't really enjoy this. I can definitely see some potential in it, but right now it's just very rough. I had to read it through about three ...

Hi! So I read this over twice, and I was thinking one thing: slow down! In the first part, you had a lot of moments of subtly that really allowed ...

Hi Kit! So, I'm really torn as to what my general thoughts on this piece are. There were a few things I liked, and a few things I didn't like. ...

Hi! To be honest with you, this poem left me quite confused. I couldn't really understand what it is about and what new knowledge you wanted the reader to walk ...