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Perse. You write poetry beautifully. But I think you already know that, don't you? I've always been somewhat mediocre at it, so try to take this review with a grain ...

Hi, Calligraphy! So, I thought that this was a very well-written poem and that you were able to convey a strong central theme without. I might be a bit biased ...

Whoa, okay! So, this is an interesting story. I like the idea of it, and I think you definitely have the potential to take it far. Right now, this just ...

Hi, This was really good. It was sweet and conveyed a lot, but it was also simple and to the point. It was something that was easy to relate to, ...

Hi, Micki! So, this was an interesting little story and it was well-written from start to finish. Your description was good and it had a nice flow, and in such ...

Hi! Um, so as this stands, this is kind of jumbled. You're trying to pack a lot into such a short space of time, and it really feels confusing when ...

Hi! So, this was a very cute poem, and it made me smile. I think any kind of writer (regardless of what type) can relate to it. It's an easy ...

Ooh, interesting! This is really short, so I don't exactly have much to say for you; it's an interesting start with promising characters. The cold war was always an interesting ...

Hi there! So, um, yeah. This isn't awful, and I've definitely seen poetry that is much worse, but I feel like you can, by any means, do better than what ...

Okay! So, hi! I just had a few quick comments. This was alright; it's certainly not awful by any standards. However, I still think that there is so, so much ...

Hi there! So, this was a really neat short story. You had a powerful atmosphere and were able to convey your image well. Your use of second person was excellent ...

Hi! This was an interesting piece to read; did you base it off of Black Swan, by any chance? Love that movie. Anyway, you seem to have pretty solid ideas ...

Chamoile - Persephoneia Too much honey again - the golden liquid swirls in clumps, and a little drips down the edge. I sigh and take a sip, too hot and ...

Hi there. :) So, this was sweet, but like dregy said, it didn't exactly muster any emotion, or at least the emotion that it could have should you have gone ...

Hi inkwell, I think that this a really cool piece. I have to wonder, is this free verse or does it carry any sort of specific structure? It seems like ...