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  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Droppings

    Hey Leutnant! I'm Elinor, dropping by to review your poem since I saw this has been sitting in the green room for a while. Because this is intentionally bad, I'm ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: yin and yang

    Hey manilla! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by quickly to give your poem a review. If I'm interpreting it correctly, this is about an abusive stepmother, which is definitely ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: In Morning

    Hey Battlestar! I'm Elinor, just dropping by to review your poem. I definitely enjoyed reading it. While this very subject has been covered in a lot of poetry, songs, and ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Can You Keep a Secret?

    Hi Coco! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by to give your piece a review. What I like about this piece is it has a lot of potential. Your descriptions ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Splashin’ Waters

    Hey Danni! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by to review your work today. What I liked about this story is that it was simple, feel good, and it followed ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I’m In Love With You, I’m sorry.

    Hey woah! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to review your poem. What I enjoyed most about it was how effectively you convey the sense that falling in love something is ...

    Jun 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Spiritual, General Re: The Wise Man and The Barber

    Hey aulyasela! Elinor here dropping by to give you a review. What I liked about this story is how it tonally felt like either a fairytale or a fable. It's ...

    Jun 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Pyromaniac - 1

    Hey Manilla! Elinor here to give you a review. Thanks for sharing this story with us. What I think this story does well is taking us to a very specific, ...

    Jun 21, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love

    Hey Lives4Christ! Elinor here to give you a quick review. Writing haikus are fun, and they can be easy to write, but writing one that's great is also something that's ...

    Jun 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God's Universe: Genre: Syllabic verse 7 5 7 as in a Haiku.

    Hi Radrook, Saw this work in the green room and thought I would drop by to give it a review. I think the basic concept of this is fine, although ...

    Jun 20, 2018
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: to the ones who taught me without knowing it

    Hey sound! :D I can't think if I've reviewed a work of yours yet, but I'm here to fix that now -- too bad this has been sitting in the ...

    Jun 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Spaceship

    Hey shaniac! Elinor here to give you a review. I wanted to thank you for sharing this story! I quite enjoyed reading it. Overall this is a simple set-up, but ...

    Jun 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: October

    Hey Snazzy! I'm Elinor, here to give you a review. Congratulations on getting this out after not writing for a while! It's definitely something to be proud of. What I ...

    Jun 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Shadowreapers

    Hi Danni! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by to give your work a review. Because I haven't read the larger work that this is attached to, I'm just going ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Script » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Constance's Monologue

    Hey elaeh! Elinor here to give you a review. Like Pan, I was happy to see a monologue like this since you don't often see them around the site. While ...

    Jun 19, 2018


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