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Re: Droppings
Hey Leutnant! I'm Elinor, dropping by to review your poem since I saw this has been sitting in the green room for a while. Because this is intentionally bad, I'm ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: yin and yang
Hey manilla! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by quickly to give your poem a review. If I'm interpreting it correctly, this is about an abusive stepmother, which is definitely ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: In Morning
Hey Battlestar! I'm Elinor, just dropping by to review your poem. I definitely enjoyed reading it. While this very subject has been covered in a lot of poetry, songs, and ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: Can You Keep a Secret?
Hi Coco! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by to give your piece a review. What I like about this piece is it has a lot of potential. Your descriptions ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: Splashin’ Waters
Hey Danni! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by to review your work today. What I liked about this story is that it was simple, feel good, and it followed ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: I’m In Love With You, I’m sorry.
Hey woah! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to review your poem. What I enjoyed most about it was how effectively you convey the sense that falling in love something is ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: The Wise Man and The Barber
Hey aulyasela! Elinor here dropping by to give you a review. What I liked about this story is how it tonally felt like either a fairytale or a fable. It's ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: Pyromaniac - 1
Hey Manilla! Elinor here to give you a review. Thanks for sharing this story with us. What I think this story does well is taking us to a very specific, ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: Love
Hey Lives4Christ! Elinor here to give you a quick review. Writing haikus are fun, and they can be easy to write, but writing one that's great is also something that's ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: God's Universe: Genre: Syllabic verse 7 5 7 as in a Haiku.
Hi Radrook, Saw this work in the green room and thought I would drop by to give it a review. I think the basic concept of this is fine, although ...
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: to the ones who taught me without knowing it
Hey sound! :D I can't think if I've reviewed a work of yours yet, but I'm here to fix that now -- too bad this has been sitting in the ...
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: Spaceship
Hey shaniac! Elinor here to give you a review. I wanted to thank you for sharing this story! I quite enjoyed reading it. Overall this is a simple set-up, but ...
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: October
Hey Snazzy! I'm Elinor, here to give you a review. Congratulations on getting this out after not writing for a while! It's definitely something to be proud of. What I ...
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: The Shadowreapers
Hi Danni! I'm Elinor, and I'm just dropping by to give your work a review. Because I haven't read the larger work that this is attached to, I'm just going ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: Constance's Monologue
Hey elaeh! Elinor here to give you a review. Like Pan, I was happy to see a monologue like this since you don't often see them around the site. While ...
Jun 19, 2018
