Elijah

King Here Hello there! I saw you had released this part also so after I had read the fourth one I will tel you my honest opinion about this, too. ...

King Here I had forgotten to even check for the following parts of this story. Please, forgive me for this mistake. I just saw this in the green room and ...

The chat bubbles were amazing and if you possible can tell me how you made them, I would be gladful. Anyways, I only have several complains. Overall, I really adore ...

King Here Did they do that or nah I am not sure to be honest but this is not the matter here. I think you made it too cliché and ...

Hello,there! Saw that I have the chance to check this following part to so came to do that right away! I felt that her manager was jealous when she smiled ...

King Here Oh, great, they finally start to flirt! XD Anyways, this was a very amazing part as every other. Of course, I will try to see the other ones ...

The end of this part just made me think this is going to be creepy but I think this is not the matter here. The people in the portrait smiled. ...

King Here I had read and reviewed the previous part and I was surprised to see you had already released even more. I have no time right now to review ...

Hello there! Welcome in YWS, I see you are a new member here. I hope you have fun here. So, now for this work. I want pretty surprised when I ...

Hello there. I really got interested in this work. Though the ending really make me feel sad. I can relate to this and not every person deserves our precious secrets ...

This work really caught my attention. It is really heart warming in the end when we understand she is sitll willing to go on and live for the child she ...

Kind Here Hello there! I thought, why not review your lovely works one by one? I love reading them anyways and this way we will help you improve your works, ...

You had started putting the punctuation on the right places, so I think you need to continue doing it. I will edit it as a whole poetry work, with all ...

Hello there! I really like your work, and the innocent and feelings put it in, I think it is short but still deserving the read and enjoyment of a reader ...

King Here Hello there! I really love your short poetry but I think it needs some work. Other reviewers had already told you about them, but I will still mention ...