Elelel

I vote Emily ... I loved Wuthering Heights. All that drama and hate! Good fun. However I did really like Jane Eyre too ... so it was close.

Hello! I'm glad you've posted more of this story. It's interesting! Ok. You've still got awkward patches. Like: [Quote deleted at original author's request] You've got too many "with"s, and ...

Monkeys do. Chimpzilla does not. Anybody who knows ANYTHING about Chimpzilla knows THAT.

No worries! Yay! It's all pretty and spaced out! If there's a reason, then it's fine. I don't know how you could make it less confusing. Anyway, that was just ...

(yeah, spoilers again) Well ... ok. Still didn't like that book so much as the first one. It wasn't just those few points that turned me off it. It just ...

Has anyone read Monstrous Regiment or Night Watch? They're my favourites, I think. If you don't count the Bromeliad Triliogy. When I first read them they were the best things ...

does anything need to be changed? NEVER! *sobs and cries* It's beautiful! The bit where the unicorn got upset ... heartbreaking!

My name? Well, it's not any language. I made it up. And it's my pleasure to help! :P

*stares* Yep. That helps. I think you picked out every single tiny little sentence I couldn't get quite right, and thanks to you I think I can fix them now. ...

YAY!!! I loves it!

Of coarse not! It's perfect!

*wipes another tear from eye* The simplicity! The beauty! The ... leaves!

*wipe tear from eye* It's beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! I was crying before the second line. I simply cannot critique because it is so perfect!

I think some people didn't get it because they're not American and don't know who these people are, they only know its got "Bush" in the title so they instantly ...

It is a little hard to understand, but you used some lovely imagry, and like jennafina said, the words were great too. Drawing in the final smells of happiness I ...