Eimear

Heya, welcome to YWS. I'm Eimear and I'm your worst nightmare. Just kidding, hehe. OPEN MIND Release your hold upon the Earth, Letting go the roots that hold you down. ...

Right, I'm going to admit it from the outset- as there's no point in pretending: I only understood certain bits of this. But that's a good thing, because it confused ...

Ach Kris, how's it going? Wow- this is certainly experimental anyway. Indeed. To the max. Well, the first thing I would say is that I'm not sure this word is ...

I think the problem is, just to develop on Ringo's point of you telling us everything and leaving the reader with nothing to think about- you need to balance a ...

The fact that you are in serious need of 'showing' and uses more poetic devices aside, I really liked this. Maybe I'm in a weird mood, but I absolutely loved ...

Ach I loved this. Seriously, even without your explanation it's clear you took time and a lot of effort to perfect this. The theme is strong throughout and the meter ...

A prozac-like smile That could stretch about a mile Greeted me in my own house 'Hello!' he beamed As he popped out from behind the door My mind giggled happily ...

Wow. This is very deep, and very heartfelt indeed. You've managed this very well, and I have to say it's probably the best war poem I've read on here- probably. ...

Hey Josh, sorry about my delayed response here- because I read this, thought about it, and then completely forgot about reviewing this. In your response there you talked about all ...

This is the first rap I've read on this, and the first one I've seen from you. It kicked serious.. well, It was really good. Right bang in your face ...

So this is cool. In some serious need of punctuation- but I liked it nonetheless. The other responses coupled with mine show how much we cared about the speaker, because ...

I agree with both reviewers; great ideas, imagery, the whole shebang is there- but now you need to order it into something a little more readable. Put in a rhythm ...

Haha, this was fantastic! I feel like jumping aboard the Bingo bandwagon already! I'm really glad you decided to put this up, I really enjoyed reading it. Chocholic's right, there's ...

Did I review this before the second draft? It seems pretty familiar. It also seems pretty awesome. The rhyme scheme- well you can't really be faulted with it in my ...

You seemed to have sacrificed certain aspects that are crucial for a poem's success in turn for trying to make this vivid and sound real. Did you experience this? I'm ...