Eimear

XD This is quite the troubled rock star's hymn, isn't it? Well I like your work on a whole and I liked this. The stuff I'm writing at the moment ...

The fact that you've so honestly posted your true feelings and thoughts up like this makes me just love it. I mean, if I was reviewing another poem with a ...

Ok, this poem is a little juvenile. It seems you've missed the point of what Dramatic Poetry truly is. I would suggest even reading the sticky 'what is dramatic poetry?' ...

Hey, I liked the concept of these questions and issues being raised by a confused and possibly disillusioned teenage boy. But unfortunately this is as far as it goes for ...

Man do I agree with all of Gahks points. He's pretty much said all I wanted to say about this piece- yes, the grammatical errors as they let the piece ...

I agree with some of the other reviewer's points. This is very vague- yet surprisingly confusing. The way I see it, poetry needs to be written and presented so that ...

Hey Mayfyre, how's it going for you? You seem to be adapting well to YWS life. I really enjoy it when I see you've posted another poem. The first time ...

Hey Yuki, and welcome to YWS- I hope you stick around. I see you're from Canada- what's it like? That's a country I've always wanted to visit. Now- to the ...

Hey, so I can see from your poem that you did indeed have some problems. However you persevered and tried to write it, and it showed. It almost had a ...

Ah- Bravo! *Claps Welcome to YWS! Just remember to take a few minutes to look at the Rules and Guidelines - we expect each member to do 2 reviews before ...

Hmmm. Once again I'm struggling to understand your complex poetry, and once again I'm thoroughly impressed. This poem is obviously full of raw emotion, in which the speaker is trying ...

Juncboks- I don't really quite know what to say about this piece. Firstly, on YWS we usually steer clear from trying to explain poetry beforehand as a famous poet once ...

My main problem with this is, (although I'm in the same boat as the other reviewers in that I liked it) was the telling rather than showing aspect of it. ...

Yes I agree with both Gahks and Rebirth. A marvellous poem about the sea. Your poetic voice seems strangely well developed for someone of your age. That's a good thing, ...

I live in a place dim and tight where the boogyman comes out at night (Full stop) I do everything I can to stay awake begging God for a break ...