Ego

Thank you very much! Sorry to hear about your own experiences with sucks.

Ok, next draft. Removed all but the quotations and the punctuation within the quotes. Also added line breaks after "The first time..." etc. Improvement? The first time You were everything ...

You probably do, Crys--as you do, Carmina, you just aren't putting the pieces together. It's the three times I would be dead had someone not interfered... Once when D dumped ...

Thanks Quiz--I moved Emergence to JustGoat, since it's turning into quite the Noir story. Check it out if you're interested in reading a new beginning for it.

Nice job, Emz. You kept up the same style through the whole thing, so thats always fun. I really like the Ryan thing, though I did pick up on it ...

Ooh, good stuff. Your language could use some tightening up, but the dialogue was good stuff. It seemed really natural and casual, as it should. Bad TBR....double space those paragraphs..

Gee, thanks Carmina :roll:

Considering the theme is sleep, the title is Sleep, and everyhthing about the poem is sleep... Yeah, sleep is not overused here...

Ok, cool--can't wait to see the next installment; any plans to put it up here on the boards?

Read poll, answer. Do it now!

Have I EVER posted a story in full? The answer is no. This is still in progress, there is much to be done!

Enjoy! ORIGINS OF THE DHAMPIR “He comes,” Lord Damon Belhaven stood at the railing of his balcony, looking out over his land. At the horizon, fires burned and trails of ...

I still really love this poem--it's really sweet, even if it does have a whole new meaning to me recently :(.

Good work Bobo--very creative. My only peeve, as uual, is your choice of words (glint into the darkness?) Nice job homeslice

I'm diggin' this--I like the rhyming that goes along with the very morbid topic, kinda creepiness. I also like the pacing, it doesn't falter or skip anywhere, which is awesome--it ...