Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Coming soon (gimme an hour) to the Young Writers Society, the prequel to Hunter's much loved ( ) and much delayed ( ) Novel, Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence. This novella while a story in itelf, will give you background information on many of the characters in the Dhampir novels. It takes place sometime in the early 1400s, the time of Vlad the Impaler--the original vampire. Packed full of action, adventure, bloog and guts, conflict and tragedy, and lots of really cool sword fights, read on to learn who Dracula REALLY was.
Well this is an intriguing one right here. Its not often I see something that is functionally almost something of an advertisement to a story rather than anything else. This isn't trying to be anything else like a blurb or a preface, so let me try and view it through the lens of what it is trying to do here.
I think as a whole, this semi works, but I feel like you end up not talking enough about the story itself to really give it much of a chance to sign. A large percentage of this is taking up with other things and I feel like the best solution would be to just try and include just a tiny bit more about what this story itself is trying to do here rather than a more generic sounding list there.
Other than that lack of information on the piece itself there is enough to catch our interest as readers and the little we do get to know does seem intriguing. There are a lot of words in there that sound like they could create a lot of interest although with barely any plot details its hard to say if it will all fit together particularly well.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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