Eferhilda

I have been to a couple of clubs in my day and yes the dancing often happens just like that as long as someone allows it and does not try ...

The line break that I had put in on prior to publishing did not go through, for some other annoying reason. As for the rephrasing while I appreciate your input, ...

This is perfect. Short, sweet and to the point the whole of it hits home and paints a rather vivid image. There is nothing about it that I would change. ...

Thank you for the review and I am glad that you enjoyed it. :)

Thank you! I myself am Bi-sexual, but I enjoy writing from a perspective that could be seen from any standpoint. The notion of being hurt and unsure of what to ...

This felt like it could have been the excerpt to a larger book or story. You know that taste of what would happen in the pages to come. I wanted ...

There is a lot of imagery in this piece and I have to say that I like it. It is not overly done and the emotion that is there I ...

If you thought it too long why bother attempting to review? As I tend to skip ones myself that I feel are too long. As noted this was written for ...

Thanks for the review. The lack of stanzas and punctuation was intentional. Also not sure what my profile picture has to do with the review.

Thanks for that catch! Corrected it! I am glad that you enjoyed my piece.

Much better!

Thank you! I tend to keep the punctuation out of my poems, unless I "feel" it is needed. I always expect to be reading it aloud to someone so to ...

Thanks! I am glad that you are able to relate my work to several different avenues. It is about love and yeah I am bit cliche and sappy myself. I ...

As always, I do value your opinion and enjoy it when you review my work. Thanks for the review and I am so happy that you enjoyed my work.

Thank you! I means a lot to me when my work is enjoyed, even if it may make people cry...:P