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Re: You won
I like!
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: finish me off
I guess I can't say it was phenomenal, because your speaking the truth, but I will say that poem the great! It was very direct and it let a lot ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Athena, Your Hatred Stays Strong
Hey, good poem! I love Athena and Greek mythology. I just think that was so cool. I like! It sounded like a real person from that time era would say ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: My Eyes See You.
I liked how you didn't rhyme. It was great! I liked how you were hiding in the shadows watching them. Your good. Keep it up!
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: [Untitled]
I thought the pace was great. It was what a poem should be. The vocabulary, the pace, the expression. Everything. It was a good poem and you deserve the great ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: A Divine Love
I liked it! I like all of your poetry, actually to tell you the truth. KEEP IT UP! I'm going to follow you!
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Im "Just"
I liked it. I just don't think you should have put the hole lazy thing. That sort of threw me off, actually.
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Breathing Insanity
Awesome! Loved it!
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: A Dream of Death
LIked how you repeated yourself at the end. I liked the poem and I like your username. Keep up the good work!
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Secrets
Liked it! I admit, stories about ghosts are really weird, but this one was great!
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: My death wish
I don't think this poem is confusing. It was really sad and I loved how you put your murder into it and gave me a picture of your death. I ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Dreaming By The Window (short story)
Wow. That was really cool. I love it!
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: A Peeled Orange
I loved your story! Very awesome.
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Let The Story Unfold
OK. Thank you! That does help. I didn't really like this poem, to tell you the truth. It was just one of the many piles of poems I had and ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Too Late
OK. Thank you for the tip! It was just hard getting it all out with the same stanzas. When I was typing this, I felt there were some things I ...
Jun 23, 2010
