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Re: Am I a fool? Well seriously?
This poem doesn't make much sense at all, and I think that's the whole point of it!! It's amazing, beautifully written with a wicked sense of humor, and more importantly, ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: It's her.
Beautiful. That's all I can say. Not only because it's one of the few poems that I actually manage to understand (it's probably the only poem that has ever made ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Storyteller
Hi...!!! Welcome to YWS (Actually, we both joined on the same date ) :P Review - The poem is really good and one that people (especially on this site) can ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: Dear Poetry
I like the last part the best - Dear Poetry, How I miss the great relief you provide, Sincerely Anna (Do not subside). It's good to know that instead of ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: Calculus Boy's Very Bad School Day
Okay, no offence, but the beginning is a bit confusing. And you could have also added in a bit of description (about Calculus boy or about the story itself). That's ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: A Regret Too Late
The way you started your story - in a first person description wasn't something new. But the flashbacks and your present day reflection on them is really intriguing. This has ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: It Always Rains
Hi..!! I'm not so good at poetry, so I'll give a very brief review. The poem is absolutely beautiful..!!!! And the vocabulary and words used by you just make it ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: If I Have a Daughter
wow. This is really beautiful and the thing that stands out in this poem, or makes it so special is that you wrote it to encourage something which defies the ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: ever-shifting waves
Its a really nice poem, though I couldn't figure out what it actually was about. (I suck at poetry, so excuse me) ... But the way you've describes things is ...
Mar 22, 2013
