ERZA

You should totally revise this and redo it man! Cos I loved some of the adjectives like iridescent void; etc but it seemed crappy because of how it looked - ...

Eeekks! That last part was definately creepy! My bones almost got chilled frozen :-) Anyways, real interesting story you have got there ^^ I really have no idea what was ...

Good story and it has quite an amount of suspense too (because I am starting this story with this chapter XD)... I really liked the way you presented everything and ...

Wow nice suspense :-) This is my first time reading this story and I must say the plot is very different and original. I really liked the way this story ...

Hoho nice story ^^~ I am here to review this chapter of yours by the way. This is my first time reading this story and somehow I am glad I ...

Awesome story I must say! ^^ ERZA's here to review by the way. :-D Although this is my first time reading this story, all the while I read, I never ...

Awesome poem Dreamy! ^^ You were quite successful in conveying your message or rather your feelings through this simple and beautiful poem. I could really feel those feelings inside me ...

Hey there! Nice topic.. But I think it would shine much better if it was a poem as the way you wrote does not quite match(?) with how you write ...

Wow! a very good poem poem I must say^^Welcome to YWS and I hope you continue to write such beautiful poems.. It really as the touch of the poet him/her ...

Hey Rain! Nice^^~ I really liked how you expressed everything in such a few words. Its pretty simple and very normal looking(if you just look at how everything was written). ...

Life is indeed very beautiful and so is this song :-) However, it isn't feal its feel also happyness is actually happiness. The line- happiness will be made just does ...

Lovely! :-) Although instead of seating it should be sitting. And other then that it should be no ones gonna change my mind. They were the basic errors could be ...

The ending was a bit bland but I must say you are pretty good at this :-D :-D I loved the way your poem was written. It has that simple ...

This is a bit confusing. However I am able to guess that this is related to Naruto anime or manga whichever. But this is not a fanfiction I think as ...

Wow this is a very touching story. :-) Everything was thought of and was nicely written. The atmosphere...the melancholy and the whole scene was near perfect! It also has the ...