ERANBEAR

this, i felt, was a great fanfic. however there a few grammar and spelling errors that you might want to check out. plus i would love it if you did ...

pretty good

LOVE IT!!!!!

again i say perfect. ironic though that I never said perfect in the first place :smt003 ERANBEAR peace out type on!!!

ziggiefred please tell all of ur friends on YWS about this and love [edited]

sorry guys im new just got on yesterday and when i was editing i did something wrong and i had to start over

ok so now that ive read it through its great. sorry i just read the sexual part and stopped because i found it offensive but its really great that emily ...

whoa that's... :smt007 maybe a little to far but what can i say hypocrisy is not a mature thing for a critic

definately a work i progress

that was great!!!!!! one problem though, "which he did but didn't know how" (sorry if it's not exact words but u get the gist) you need to be more specific. ...

i change tori to matt. Main Street to Central Park. And added some deets hope you like it :smt040

thanks guys i really appreciate the feedback :smt003 I know I know its a work in progress