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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: the shift of the heart

    i really love this poem and it brought me some inspiration! it is so gorgeous and bathes in its sorrow at the perfect temperature. i also want to add that ...

    Jul 1
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Door

    ooo this poem is very nice! line 2: i feel the word force isn't exactly coherent with the theme about conforming since if the door sounded forced and it's supposed ...

    Jun 25
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: development of an eating disorder

    hello me here! i liked this poem. let me go through line by line what i think. first off, food log. this is a cool concept for your poem and ...

    Jun 14
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: In My Own Country

    this is an awesome poem! my favorite part was probably the lines about being in your own country and feeling like you're trespassing. i just really liked the wording. as ...

    May 22
  • Poetry » General, General Re: it is said, in sickness & in health

    greetings! i liked this poem. It's short in a way where it leaves up to for interpretation and keeps the ending a bit vague. I see this poem to be ...

    May 14
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Time.

    hey its been awhile! i think this poem is pretty great! it shows some emotion and constant stress about the future and growing up. it captures that very well! i ...

    Apr 2
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Dysphoria

    I enjoy this poem! I like how it's short because it shows how tired they've grown from explaining everything they feel. I love the use of language in the poem ...

    Jan 10
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the snow queen with a heart of ice still wears a fur coat

    i loveee this poem! the way the end is written feels very visual and starts turning into nice abstract art! it's very chilling in a great way in how it ...

    Dec 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: She Was a Girl

    i LOVE the structure of this poem. while i know it's not uncommon for this structure, it still feels comforting in a way for it's simplicity. it also helps the ...

    Dec 9, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: but what if my soul is good?

    I liked reading this poem quite some bit! The way it's written makes it easy to read and still manages to tell a story nicely at length. What I do ...

    Nov 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: miss you.

    This was a very emotional poem and it really really made me sad. Especially since you put the note aswell. I went through a breakup recently too and I've been ...

    Nov 2, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Window of Truth

    I really like it! It is beautiful and solemn work of art. To me this represents not being able to break a cycle. When this person was young, they're parents ...

    Nov 2, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: what cuts can bleed.

    Ahhhh I love this one a lot. I don't read much spoken poetry but reading this made me very fond of it! The way you combined words to make amazing ...

    Oct 29, 2025


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