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Hey I am Erin, and let's first start with what I thought could be improved. I agree partially with TenYo, on how long your lines are, it's almost intimating to ...

Hey, I'm Erin. I really like it, and the way you had used different fonts, made it very unique and fun to read. Though some of your fonts were a ...

Hi I'm Erin. When I read this, I actually liked it. I am not a big fan of these types of stories, but it was very interesting. I like how ...

Hey I am Erin, and first off I actually really liked this poem. It is very dramatic, and I love how you described the life:loathsomeness. Also, the flow of this ...

Hey BeautifulDoom. This is Erin, and first off, love it overall. It was very original. I walk through the evil doors Love the image This place is filled with trashy ...

Hey girl! It's Erin, and well actually I have to agree with what everyone else has said. I've read probably 50 of your poems, and I really don't actually feel ...

Hi! I'm Erin I really did enjoy this, i liked the flow and the rhythme. There was only two things that stood out to me, and that was when you ...

Hey Sarah this is Erin, just some minor point outs and room for improvement right here. Paragraph 1 Your very repetitive, it's like four sentences on just Mrs. Smith walking. ...