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Re: The best Day Ever
Hiya! This is a very beautiful experience, thank you for sharing it with us :) I didnt find many mistakes, it was very beautifully written. I feel, you could have ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Keep In the Silence
Hiya! Here's dutiful to review your work: This story is quite good. Very promising :) I like the theme, its very unique. You dont see a lot of those these ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Vince N Slicer
Hello!! Here's the review: I liked the story. I feel very sorry for Vincent. He's been through a lot and you've portrayed his feelings very well :) Congratulations on that. ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Vista of Moonlit Night
Hey there! Here to give you a review of this poem: There isnt much to say that hasnt already been said. :) This poem made me smile the whole way ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: The Eclipse- Chapter One
Hey there! I've read your chapter and here's my review: This is a very well written chapter, I must say. The story line(even though I haven't figured it out yet) ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: A leaf in the wind.
Hello there! Nice to see you've written a story. Here's my review of the first chapter: Now the title is quite different. Mysterious and I like it. But I dont ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Conflict
Here's my review: Its a beautiful poem. I really loved all the metaphors used to represent the game of chess. Chess is a beautiful game, and you've done a pretty ...
Apr 29, 2013
