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  • Short Story » General, Other Re: The best Day Ever

    Hiya! This is a very beautiful experience, thank you for sharing it with us :) I didnt find many mistakes, it was very beautifully written. I feel, you could have ...

    May 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Keep In the Silence

    Hiya! Here's dutiful to review your work: This story is quite good. Very promising :) I like the theme, its very unique. You dont see a lot of those these ...

    May 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Vince N Slicer

    Hello!! Here's the review: I liked the story. I feel very sorry for Vincent. He's been through a lot and you've portrayed his feelings very well :) Congratulations on that. ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vista of Moonlit Night

    Hey there! Here to give you a review of this poem: There isnt much to say that hasnt already been said. :) This poem made me smile the whole way ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: The Eclipse- Chapter One

    Hey there! I've read your chapter and here's my review: This is a very well written chapter, I must say. The story line(even though I haven't figured it out yet) ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: A leaf in the wind.

    Hello there! Nice to see you've written a story. Here's my review of the first chapter: Now the title is quite different. Mysterious and I like it. But I dont ...

    Apr 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Politics Re: Conflict

    Here's my review: Its a beautiful poem. I really loved all the metaphors used to represent the game of chess. Chess is a beautiful game, and you've done a pretty ...

    Apr 29, 2013


You wake up in the morning and it feels impossible? Good. You do it anyway.
— Martin Scorcese