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  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Presidential Pants Pandemonium

    Hi there! I'm here to review your fantastic and simply amazing work! Oh my, where do I start? This was so awesome to read! I don't think I've ever had ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Genuine Smiles

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaaabulous work! I thought this was really good! You've done a really good job, I must say! This really made me smile all ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Meet the Family (second draft)

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaabulous work! Dude, where have you been all my life? This is what I thought when I read this work. Because honestly, this ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Invitation of a Heart

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faabulous work! I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this! Your use and choice of descriptives were amazing, and it made me ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Prologue

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaabulous work! And truly, it is fabulous! Man, I really loved reading this so so so much! I can't even begin to describe ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Uncanny

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaaabulous work! To start off, I really like the originality of the name for the protagonist. 'Xez' .I thought it sounded wicked cool! ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We are who we are

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaaabulous work! Hmm this is a tough one. I'm not sure how to go about this one. I admit, I liked reading what ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: In Search of Chimes

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaaabulous work! There's only one word I can use to describe the whole story: Beautiful. Because that's what it was. It was truly ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Politics Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 1

    Hi there! I'm here to review your work! First of all, welcome to the family :) Now, on to your story: I have mixed feelings regarding this. I like this ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Other Side: Prologue

    Hi there! I'm here to review your faaabulous work! I thought this was very well written. I really liked the way you described the main character. Perhaps, I felt the ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: How Does One Say Goodbye?

    Hello there! I'm here to review your fabulous work! First of all, let me start by saying that I absolutely understand and relate to what you might be feeling because, ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Love at first sight?

    Hi there! I'm here to review your fabulous work! Well I must say, I wasn't expecting this at all! I thought it was going to be a rant or your ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Teen Love and What kills it

    Hi there! I'm here to review your fabulous work! Let me start by saying that this is a very intriguing piece of work. It had me wondering and redefining the ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: My Last Wish

    Hi there! I'm here to review your fabulous piece of work! Before I get on to the nitpicking, I would just like to say that on the whole, this is ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Flew Too Close to the Sun

    Hi there! I'm here to review this fabulous piece of work! FIrst of all, let me start by how much your work drew me in. I literally loved reading every ...

    May 25, 2014


We are not to simply bandage the wounds of victims beneath the wheels of injustice, we are to drive a spoke into the wheel itself.
— Dietrich Bonhoeffer