DustyFreeman

This is one of the most amazing works I've ever read. I personally love guitars, the way you used the guitar's player view on the surrounded, and switch it over ...

I love this so much! It seems as if you're a map, plotting the coordinates of love! :] To me, this poem shows a change in life, it shows that ...

Hi, Shini. I have to say I loved this poem. I didn't find any grammatical errors (I hope I didn't miss any; I'd feel bad.) I thought the rhyme scheme ...

This is pretty awesome!!!! I love this one too! You just keep gettting better. One thing I noticed is that I'm quite like Jayson at times. Getting into the oddest ...

I like this a lot. But I was just a bit confused about the beast. Who is he? What is he?> Why is he there? What is he doing? How ...

You have quite the obscure opinion. But, every one is entitled to one! Science is quite an interesting subject, I like the one you use the 'rant' type of styling! ...

Pure beauty. I love the way you explain everything, using it to connect. That's the whole point! It's pretty strange at how you use your words. But I like it! ...

I absolutely love this! You have no idea. The flow, the concept the creativity. You're amazing! Almost like my ex girlfriend, but a tad smarter, and more brave to use ...

I do like this concept, or to show the more cornier side of me, I 'love' this poem :D For a first time, very good job. I think you should ...

Very great! I love the theme and how you laid it all out! Perhaps splitting it in half, and creating two stanzas would help the Judgment. Just one thing that ...

That day, When I told you how stupid you were, and I said that you needed to grow up, and move on I didn't really mean it. I was foolish, ...

Wow... Good use of onomatopoeia's! But, hmm, this rhyme scheme, or just the overall type of poem is so confusing! You have thing jumping all around. Like: Heartless and lacking ...

Wow! Amazing! I think this magazine will love this article! Just a few typos here and there. I have noticed that all friends have made up their own little 'gang', ...

You will have to forgive me, but I am an error and typo freak. So there are a few of those here and there. Other than that, I think this ...

Hello. Not too bad! I do enjoy the theme, and I do agree that its something very hard. But, it may be just me, but the rhyming seems forced throughout ...