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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Things I Carry

    I look towards the map and decide on a destination; preference is extended towards the five boroughs and the Metropolitan Transit Authority- This statement suddenly seemed oddly stated, but after ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Feathers in the wind

    Well, it's a short poem that I didn't completely understand the concept of: Oh dear, imprudent fellow – You – why do you write like this? the portion seemed weird ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: REMOVED

    It sounds like it came from the movie my soul to take. The imagery was missing, rhyming went weell but you must have noiticed glitches ion ur grammmar, I also ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: games

    The the game is solved. The the kings stack up like Sherwood venison, I play red, you, black, and we skim two of the humours across quadrants, planes, ……….the Chinooks ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Insecurity

    I always thought you'd be My prince charming. somehow this doesn’t rhyme Now I see you took advantage of my insecurity You never really liked me. I see the emotion, ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Forgive

    Forgive Is this the title? …….Forgive the ground: unfertile, dry. we usually say Infertile land, make infertile, dry’ the next line. …………………we are irrelevent just the same. irrelev

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]

    Lord, you write huge stuff! I’m not an avid reader or expert writer, I’ll simply say what I feel. Hope you’re fine with that. piano sounding sour, feels a bit ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Freedom

    I'm sick of this life That this maze of pain and sadness I want to get out I don't belong to this world I broke the chains that binds me ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: White lines

    Started out little , smoking weed 'til it's dry I feel that punctuation was missing here later needing something different, something else to try So let me introduce myself , ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Only Hope

    your sweet poison infects my blood stream, from this line create a new paragraph and like wise do so every time u change the rhyming pattern. The song..or was it ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Alone, but alive

    Happy birthday, I am quite right twenty This felt redundant- the qiute right part having been cursed for this latter decade to share what do u mean by a date ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Purity Lost

    The rain trickled down on her perfectly done, auburn hair. Rain droplets joined the tears on her makeup-caked rosy cheeks. Well, I’m not an avid reader, maybe that’s y- but ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: One with Serenity

    Sunlight peeks through the clouds and dances on the tips of blades, green and rich as moss in a swamp. I see u’re breaking sentences, it gives this sort of ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Fate I Never Chose

    Since when are u a poet? Oh and an epic one too! (I'm being my toughest critic- don't mind.) You actually have good imagery, it’s like describing in a story ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Heavenly Dark

    Sometimes black,And sometimes white. But always in time This sounds more appropriate To make it right. You twist shatter flows in better my heartInto a million pieces,And catch my breathUntil ...

    Sep 5, 2011


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind