Ducati

Soaked to the skin Chilled to the bone The raindrops trickle down my cheek sort of redundant and doesn't add much I stand here still, waiting Hoping and praying That ...

I liked it. The kid was cute! Just a few little things. He began his mornings the same way every day; come rain, snow, sleet, or hail. You already said ...

I loved it, but I'm a bit confused. If he never heard from her again, why where they talking at the start? I didn't undertand where tha bit was in ...

Hi, I'm going to review your poem today! I’m surrounded by glass Which Frost’s lips have touched the personification doesn't work for me for one reason: I think you are ...

With quick moving hands And urgent lips. (like the first two lines :) ) As if tossed in bed, (don't get this, why would beign tossed in bed make a ...

I agree that you messed up the tenses. I suggest you switch to past, the present can get annoying really fast. This piece actually did annoy me. It had too ...

If I die tomorrow, Will the memories fade to gray? Will all of this confusion Ever have something to say? If I die tomorrow, I hope you know just one ...

Right, first off, I like it. I watched a tv show about this so it intrigued me. One thing I think you shoudl do is make the tone less conversational. ...

So, this should be rated R because you say fuck in it. Just a little thing. I was pretty confused as to what was going on. I know it's good ...

I really liked this, it reads alot like James Bond. Hope that's a good thing! I love the way you really caught he scenery and used humour to make us ...

I don't really like ripping things up. To be honest, if something is terrible, I wouldn't bother to critique it. Broken Me Silence fills the shadows of my heart, (maybe ...

Prologue The still summer night was silent. Nothing moved, not even the leaves covering the many trees. A thin mournful howl suddenly split the air, piercing through the scilence like ...

Ok, first of all, love the idea! I think you've got a good thing going but there are a few clunky moments that could be better. 1 The canisters were ...

Um Great be honest I couldn't even finish it. The closest I have got to reading more Dickens is watching a BBC version of Bleak house on tv and writing ...

I loved this! I read it at age I probably shouldn't have, but it kinda became a late childhood favourite. I read her the circle of five too which was ...