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Re: Ch 6: Protest of class 5
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! This was a great chapter with all the classes of different subjects. The chapters are improving day by day, there aren't many ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: Ch 5: A New School
Alice is here to give a review!!! Well done this time with the chapter. This will be the best work of yours I have read till now. You really are ...
Feb 8, 2021 -
Re: Ch 3: A Good Tiding For Lonely Marie & Ch 4: A New Place
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! The chapters are nice and well written. Just try adding some good descriptions like the other reviewer before me has pointed out. ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Version 1: Loss
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! Oh it was such a tense read, the action started from the beginning. I was so heartbroken when she died, your descriptions ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: The most disobedient
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! It was a nice start with the two main characters. Your diologues are well written. This was so relatable I think every ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: Least Romantic 2 Electric Boogaloo: Chapter 2
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! Oh god this was such an interesting chapter. I am getting excited to see what this trio Super Hero team will do. ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 3
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! Well this was a simple and well written chapter. Everything was nice in this chapter, you showed the lonely personality of Raymie ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: MTOHS - Chapter 2.2
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! This was a great chapter. The diologues were very well written and the suspense was maintained throughout the chapter. I am very ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Least Romantic 2 Electric Boogaloo
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!!! After reading this new version of Least Romantic, I am curious to read the previous one's chapters. It was a very fun ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 2
Hey Alice here to give a review!!!! So Hannah where is the first chapter of this novel I am not able to find it in your portfolio? Now coming back ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Estrea - Chapter 1, 2 and 3
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! A very nice world-building with all the details. And it is growing interesting from the starting. I am excited to see Leah ...
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: Greyhound Bus
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! I really like the theme used in the poem, it was heartfelt and well written. There are full of emotions in the ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: The Finders Ch.4
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! It was very fun to read there conversations and you story is growing interesting chapter after chapter. And the suspense you build ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: The Finders Ch.3
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! I am here after reading the first two chapters and they all were very fun to read and this one is the ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: The Finders
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!!!! I always like when a story starts with diologues it spice the story I think, especially when there are conflicts going on. ...
Jan 31, 2021