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  • Poetry » Satire, Other Re: A Poem About Grapes and Cheese

    I expected a Game of Thrones pun at the end, nevertheless.

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 3

    Ah, then this will be my first fan fiction ever to read! Keep writing, yo, I like it!

    May 6, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shame (Thursday)

    Thank you!

    May 5, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shame (Thursday)

    Hello, I do agree that I have a lot more run on sentences like that in here, thank you for pointing it out. I know that I have not listed ...

    May 4, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shame

    Hahaha, Hannah, your excitement is freaking contagious. This is what I live for. I agree with everything you have mentioned and will try to incorporate it in the other episodes/installment. ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shame

    Very helpful, indeed. Thanks again, hey, much appreciated!

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shame

    Hello, PenguinAttack! Thank you for the review. I will consider things that you have mentioned in the future. I usually don't reason out my purpose for writing things as they ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: spectrophobia

    Hi, this is not a review. Do you like theories? I just thought I'd let you know that for some odd reason I had this illusion that Rex was an ...

    Feb 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: confession

    Explanation for the "gossiping geek": The very fact that you didn't give us enough detail about the relationship-- I find it hard to be empathetic towards the narrator. I've been ...

    Jan 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: confession

    I don't know, because writing a memoir is hard especially when I've only lived 18 years. hahaha, poor you. Take your time don't take my impatiance as pressure. :) Roman ...

    Jan 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Old Man

    The grammatical mistakes are embarrassing. It can't be a typo since I've repeated the same mistake twice which is even more embarrassing. And yes, I agree with you on the ...

    Sep 12, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: A Day in the Life of an Insecure Relationship

    Relatable much, except the "23 new messages" c:

    May 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Post-perpetual

    Mei Mei reminded me of Sheldon's 'Me maw.' The first sentence of the first paragraph is what made me read this chapter. But, the second sentence to there-on felt pretty ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Eyes Wide Shut 6.2

    It is my pleasure, darling.

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Warning: don't take the trip

    I love it! This would sound really cool with some really cool beats. =)

    Dec 21, 2014


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote