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Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 6: Fortissimum Magia.
Yes, try to put enough description in because right now it reads more like a summary of a story. Until next time. :)
Sep 14, 2019 -
Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 5: Hero turned Villain
Hey, Moalex! I know it's hard when people expect or ask for things by just reading a single chapter. That's not fair and it's exactly why I started reading your ...
Sep 7, 2019 -
Re: Desire
Also this is such an old work. I completely forgot that it even existed haha. Thank you for bringing me back to this.
Sep 7, 2019 -
Re: Desire
Thanks! ^^
Sep 7, 2019 -
Re: The Store
Hey, hi, Mark! :D Thank you so much for the kind words. To answer your question, I just describe what I think is important to the story or how the ...
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: The Store
Ha! Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. :)
Aug 31, 2019 -
Re: Leave But Never Return part 3
Sure! :D
Aug 30, 2019 -
Re: etching the memories
Thank you for taking the time out to review. :)
Aug 27, 2019 -
Re: Hypochondriac Chapters 7-9
Oh, I'm doing my masters. College is cool, I guess. I'm not going to lie, I'm a little bit sad hearing this. But at the same time, if you don't ...
Aug 25, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 4: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
Aw, it was my pleasure reading them. Good luck with the prompt thing. And keep the chapters coming. :D
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 3: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
I think I got the episodic vibe when read the next chapter. And then I remembered that this is a fan fiction and I was like, DUH! haha. I saw ...
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 2: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
The phone conversation, yes. You could go back and forth with the characters, but since you only concentrate one character at a time, I understand. And yes, Paris. I'd love ...
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: What If... Prolouge
Glad I could be of help! :)
Aug 16, 2019 -
Re: etching the memories
Thank you for taking the time to review. ^^
Aug 13, 2019 -
Re: etching the memories
Thanks for the review. etch /%u025Bt%u0283/ verb: engrave (metal, glass, or stone) by coating it with a protective layer, drawing on it with a needle, and then covering it with ...
Aug 13, 2019
