Dreamy

Today everything felt empty and nothing. Out of the blue, this reminded me of "The Gods of small things."

I don't really know a lot about music. I'm a fan-girl(y) type. I just though that this would sound cool if it had some hard core ear drumming guitars and ...

Punk-rock? If so, that chorus will sound so great.

It sounds like you're already a star, Which you are.

WritinginRome--> Hello there, just wanted to point out that India was ruled by British people for more than 200 years, so we Indians obviously follow British English. For example we ...

2+2=5. ...equality would overshadow justice

You sir, you're romantic.

Desire is strong. It is what makes or breaks a person. According to this poem, it broke the narrator. I'm glad that you all are finding a way to connect ...

I have punctuation-disability. >_> I don't use them 'til I'm very sure about 'em, which is why I avoid them at all cost, especially in poems. But I understand the ...

Yes, I did mean "hope" there. But in the eighth line, I was referring to "innocence" not the memories, so I guess what follows makes sense. I'm sorry you don't ...

Haha! Really? I was very unsure of this. I guess derivations and the fear of studying Schrodinger equations makes me a better poet. :P

Heh! Glad I could help. :D Anytime, love. :)

There are a few things other people said that I do not want to reiterate, so I won't You were the first person to review my work. I don't know ...

Suprising end~ Good job! ^_^

You're welcome! ^_^