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Re: Honest Depiction - Ch 3
Hello, Ventomology! So we are at chapter three and there's a new character in all the three chapters. I'm afraid I won't be able to remember them all but let's ...
Aug 14, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 2: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
Hey, Dottie! Dreamy here to review! First let's get with the typos: “Of coursed Mom. ...course... “Well if I told you earlier A comma after "Well,..." Since he was the ...
Aug 13, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
Hey, Dottie! Dreamy here to review. To be honest, at first, I was thrown off by the length of this chapter but as I read it, I realised how effortless ...
Aug 12, 2019 -
Re: The Trees
Woah, man! That was deep. haha. Hi, Asith, Dreamy here to review. I loved this! You already have a very long review (which I didn't read so if I'm repeating ...
Aug 12, 2019 -
Re: Reflect me 5
Hey, demoncat! I can feel your excitement seeping through the screen while reading this. I love writers who are excited about their story. But I have to say this, you ...
Aug 11, 2019 -
Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 4: First Encounters
Woah! Hi! This chapter was action packed! Usually, I don't like to read action sequences in novel because I find it hard to follow but this was very well written. ...
Aug 10, 2019 -
Re: Reflect me 4
Hey, demoncat! I finally caught up with the story! Yay for me! This chapter had a lot going on. And the time difference was huge! Is time a thing with ...
Aug 8, 2019 -
Re: Reflect me 3
Hey, demoncat! Dreamy here for another review. I'm lagging behind, I need to catch up soon. This is a cute chapter. I like how the Ghost and Rossy are friends ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: Reflect me 2
Hey there! So I thought I'll catch up with the story and I saw that you've made some changes which are great and a little bit confusing. The second chapter ...
Aug 6, 2019 -
Re: Honest Depiction - Ch 2
Hey there! Back again for another short review. I like your characters and how effortlessly you introduce them. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Of course, I'd like to have more ...
Aug 5, 2019 -
Re: Honest Depiction - Ch 1
Hey, Ventomology! Dreamy here for a short review. I saw the second chapter of this story in the Green Room and I thought it was only fair to give the ...
Aug 4, 2019 -
Re: I will be seen
Hello, Zoom! Dreamy here for a short review. This was a really good read. I was afraid it would have a sad ending but I liked the turn of events. ...
Aug 3, 2019 -
Re: The Familiar: Into The Story (Chapter 1)
Hello, Sunrise05. Dreamy here to review. This was a good introduction to a novel. But before getting into that, let me point out some typos. The sneak peeks that post ...
Aug 2, 2019 -
Re: Hypochondriac Chapters 7-9
Hey there! I'm sorry for the late review, got caught up with college and stuff. These were again some well-written chapters. I simply adore your descriptive style though they sometimes ...
Aug 1, 2019 -
Re: Manacle: A One Act
A script! A rare art form in the site! Hey, writervid. Dreamy here to review. Before I comment on the story itself, let me discuss the structure of the script ...
Jul 23, 2019
