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Re: The evening I didn't see coming
Hi, Dreamy here to review. This is a really good story. The lay out, the conversation between the two girls, the truth about love and also their own point of ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: I am 21
Hey there, This is a feel good poem and I liked it. The change of your personality because of her and her being your cure was such a beauty. The ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: The Limit of Love <Chapter 3>
Hey there, Dreamy here to review. Gosh, you are terrible. Not in writing, of course. You are terrible to Andrew. He is such a loving good boy and you give ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 2 - Siren in Disguise
Hey there Calvinn, I must really appreciate you for this. You made it very interesting. You are a very good narrator, the details and your description on and of the ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Tohiro.
Wow, just wow. This was so good. I liked it very much because this was different and was narrated in a very good manner. But I want you to make ...
Nov 21, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Five
Hey there! This was a funny story, I don't know why but it just kept me laughing especially these lines "Do close your mouth dear. Didn't anyone ever tell you ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: Let me cry
Hey Paula, Dreamy here to review. I liked your poem. The feeling you expressed in this was easily adaptable. I can relate to your poem. The words that you used ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: The Streets of Chinatown in San Francisco
Hello, Dreamy here to review. I liked this work, or say a memoir of a place. This was well put and was very simple. What bothered me was your narration, ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: The Stranger
Hey there Dude, This is a wonderful poem and I don't know in what bases you said that you are not good in poems. The emotions were beautifully expressed in ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 10: The Kiss Part 4
Hi Dreamy here to review, To be true, I have not seen Kick-ass.But it sounds interesting maybe I will catch up with it. I liked the way you narrated I ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: The Incredible Story Of Jake Parkinson
Hey there, Dreamy here to review. I liked the way you started this story, and you need not apologize for your mistakes, because mistakes happens without our realization. Okay enough ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: The Puppeteer - Chapter One
Hey there, So Dragon has mentioned all the corrections that you have to do. So I'm going to tell you about what I liked in your story. To start of ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: Dancing with Devils, Praying for Gods
Hey there, I love your username and also your story. To be true I had to check twice to see if this was a poem because you were so poetic ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: The Sniper
Hey there Converse, Dreamy here to review. So to start of with, I really liked the way you narrated the story. It was like a screen play to some action ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: Revolution of Devils and Steel
Wow!, I mean you are cruel! :P I seriously wanted to know in what state you were when you wrote this story. Because I can sense some realism of sought. ...
Oct 26, 2013
