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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The evening I didn't see coming

    Hi, Dreamy here to review. This is a really good story. The lay out, the conversation between the two girls, the truth about love and also their own point of ...

    Dec 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am 21

    Hey there, This is a feel good poem and I liked it. The change of your personality because of her and her being your cure was such a beauty. The ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Limit of Love <Chapter 3>

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. Gosh, you are terrible. Not in writing, of course. You are terrible to Andrew. He is such a loving good boy and you give ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 2 - Siren in Disguise

    Hey there Calvinn, I must really appreciate you for this. You made it very interesting. You are a very good narrator, the details and your description on and of the ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Tohiro.

    Wow, just wow. This was so good. I liked it very much because this was different and was narrated in a very good manner. But I want you to make ...

    Nov 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Five

    Hey there! This was a funny story, I don't know why but it just kept me laughing especially these lines "Do close your mouth dear. Didn't anyone ever tell you ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Let me cry

    Hey Paula, Dreamy here to review. I liked your poem. The feeling you expressed in this was easily adaptable. I can relate to your poem. The words that you used ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Streets of Chinatown in San Francisco

    Hello, Dreamy here to review. I liked this work, or say a memoir of a place. This was well put and was very simple. What bothered me was your narration, ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Stranger

    Hey there Dude, This is a wonderful poem and I don't know in what bases you said that you are not good in poems. The emotions were beautifully expressed in ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Descent Chapter 10: The Kiss Part 4

    Hi Dreamy here to review, To be true, I have not seen Kick-ass.But it sounds interesting maybe I will catch up with it. I liked the way you narrated I ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The Incredible Story Of Jake Parkinson

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. I liked the way you started this story, and you need not apologize for your mistakes, because mistakes happens without our realization. Okay enough ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Puppeteer - Chapter One

    Hey there, So Dragon has mentioned all the corrections that you have to do. So I'm going to tell you about what I liked in your story. To start of ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Dramatic Re: Dancing with Devils, Praying for Gods

    Hey there, I love your username and also your story. To be true I had to check twice to see if this was a poem because you were so poetic ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: The Sniper

    Hey there Converse, Dreamy here to review. So to start of with, I really liked the way you narrated the story. It was like a screen play to some action ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Revolution of Devils and Steel

    Wow!, I mean you are cruel! :P I seriously wanted to know in what state you were when you wrote this story. Because I can sense some realism of sought. ...

    Oct 26, 2013


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