Dreamwalker

*shakes off rust and old pizza boxes* g'day m'dear. I'm rusty as all hell so you may or may not have to bear with that a little bit, but otherwise, ...

A pretentious rant about pretention. I suppose the irony is worth noting.

too*. Man, oh man, my typos.

The sentiment, I'm sure, was not awful. Just, how it was worded sounded kind of... er, mocking-ish? I'm sure that wasn't, of course, what you meant. And if it was, ...

I thought I would return the earlier review, though, admittedly, mine might be a little less critical. I found I rather enjoyed this, mostly for the fluctuating structure. At first ...

And sorry for any typos. I didn't really reread it, so it may have a few in there.

Sorry about any typos, specifically on the 'not' which should have been 'no'.

Sorry about the misshaped quote, by the way!

Thank you kindly for this! Just a quick note, though when it came to the tree stanza. I had an old synthetic tree growing up that had this rusted metal ...

No problem! And sorry about any typos throughout that review. I'm notorious for forgetting to reread, unfortunately.

I agree completely and wholeheartedly. I tend to spend far too much time on the plot of a poem. The introspection, as you stated prior, and the inner tumult more ...

I agree completely and wholeheartedly. I tend to spend far too much time on the plot of a poem. The introspection, as you stated prior, and the inner tumult more ...

I can definitely attest the the punctuation being a little sub-par xD. I have a tendency of being a little reckless when it comes to grammar in that sense. The ...

Actually yes, I quite understood. What I said was that you lacked poetic device. You said exactly what you mean't and you didn't try to do anything interesting. Do the ...

The graphite is a metaphor for writing. Instead of simply stating 'I write everything so I can remember where I started and where I finished in life', I chose to ...