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Re: do you remember like I do?
absolutely! and there is plenty to be proud of here. if I've offended in any way thats not at all my intentions, so please don't think I didn't like your ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: do you remember like I do?
eh, you don't have to! criticism is only useful when you're looking for it after all, so no worries.
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: the wolf and the white tree water
Definitely not harsh! I appreciate criticism in any form I get it. This poem was super personal with a lot of references to my home life growing up (i.e. Wasakwagama ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: the wolf and the white tree water
Thank you so much for the review! Just as a quick side note though, I do choose to avoid capitalization throughout this piece as a stylistic choice. I realize it's ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: i tried you on, but you didn't fit.
Sorry for the double post. YWS glitched out and resubmitted by accident. I'll let someone know about it shortly.
May 31, 2015 -
Re: i tried you on, but you didn't fit.
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May 31, 2015
Super heavy poem, m'dear. Very much your style. There is so much substance in this piece it's difficult to really get a read on it without feeling overwhelmed. Like drinking ... -
Re: rice and retrograde
Oh gosh this was so well thought out like thank you! And I definitely agree on the finer points. This poem was so interpersonal so because I assume Damien Rice ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: rice and retrograde
I thought about putting it in the description but theres a small part of me that likes the anonymity of this. I only relayed that info to explain the title, ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: rice and retrograde
Ah another rookie mistake by me. I'll fix up those volcano bits. As for the title, the poem itself is based on Damien Rice and Lisa Hannigan, it's an added ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: it's not very safe in wonderland
that actually explains a lot about this. I'm sorry to hear about your loss. it's never easy writing poetry about things this sore and tender but you did so extremely ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Reframing
gosh, my top three poets would probably be Siken, Ginsberg, and Plath but there's so many to choose from and it's really what inspires you. e.e. cummings is great too ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: she tells you your truths
on my honour as a Stark, I'll be back to review this.
May 20, 2015 -
Re: lakeside
Eh, don't be nervous! I like criticism almost as much as I like praise so feel free to put down whatever you think or feel about it. In any which ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: lakeside
This was honestly very sweet of you, like I actually smiled for a good five minutes after reading this mostly because of the fact that it was seen for what ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: Cosmic Eulogy
You're very welcome, m'dear! I think you've got a lot of talent so I'm really happy I can help.
May 7, 2015
