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Dreamwalker

  • Poetry » General, General Re: about tonight

    Awks, I feel like Walker2 and I have very different opinions, for being fellow Walker's and whatnot. As for a 'personal diary', I feel they elected not to notice the ...

    Jan 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Tick Tock Goes the Clock

    A horror poem. Interesting. First and foremost, the repetition in this poem was a bit of a far-cry from effective. Generally, when looking at a more horror-ish poem with this ...

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Secret My Mind Creates

    Walker here, as requested. There is a certain depth of emotion you're trying to convey here, and to a degree, you really attempt at hammering it home. A lot of ...

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: tilting at windmills

    There is so much good here I honestly can't even. I adore seeing old lit referenced in more stylized contemporary poetry. It's like drinking vodka out of a tea cup, ...

    Jan 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: long-winded

    I would honestly change this title to Anxiety X 10. This was an interesting spin on your stylizations. Sporadic, of course, which I'm sure was what was mean't to be ...

    Jan 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: threads

    First and foremost, just a little fun fact seeing as it's what brought me to review this work, I honestly find myself scanning through a lot of your old works ...

    Jan 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    First and foremost, welcome to YWS! I don't think we've been formally introduced. I'm Dreamwalker but most people just call me Walker. You, of course, can call me whatever you ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Brand New Eyes

    Walker here. I read this poem a couple times through, debating on whether or not I was going to review it simply due to the access of reviews you've already ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Old

    You know, I'm honestly always impressed by your prose. I don't think I've ever had the chance to tell you that, seeing as the amount I've actually talked to you ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: An Unusual Trip

    Walker here, as requested. Alright, so I don't know if you know this, but I'm a bit of a ranter, so you'll have to bear with me. The nit-picks and ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Mother Nature

    Walker here, as requested. I'm going to be quite honest with you. As a person who both enjoys reading and writing poetry, I have a lot of difficulty really enjoying ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Sometimes when I miss you

    I always liked the breaking up of a narrative poem through roman numerals. It always made the poem, as a whole, seem more clean-cut. Aesthetically pleasing, whether the substance be ...

    Dec 29, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: gone

    I must admit, you definitely have a way of playing with metaphor as a whole, seeing as you interweave them through this quite thoroughly, almost braggingly. This sort of 'look ...

    Dec 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: First Sonnet for My Grandmother

    Walker here, as requested. I like the tone of this. The way the theme is lonesome and not overplayed when it comes to the melodrama of it all. Themes like ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Labyrinth: Chapter One

    You may have to bear with me on this one seeing as I haven't reviewed prose in quite some time now. I'm a wee bit rusty. Nonetheless, I'm here as ...

    Dec 23, 2012


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