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Re: about tonight
Awks, I feel like Walker2 and I have very different opinions, for being fellow Walker's and whatnot. As for a 'personal diary', I feel they elected not to notice the ...
Jan 5, 2013 -
Re: Tick Tock Goes the Clock
A horror poem. Interesting. First and foremost, the repetition in this poem was a bit of a far-cry from effective. Generally, when looking at a more horror-ish poem with this ...
Jan 3, 2013 -
Re: The Secret My Mind Creates
Walker here, as requested. There is a certain depth of emotion you're trying to convey here, and to a degree, you really attempt at hammering it home. A lot of ...
Jan 3, 2013 -
Re: tilting at windmills
There is so much good here I honestly can't even. I adore seeing old lit referenced in more stylized contemporary poetry. It's like drinking vodka out of a tea cup, ...
Jan 2, 2013 -
Re: long-winded
I would honestly change this title to Anxiety X 10. This was an interesting spin on your stylizations. Sporadic, of course, which I'm sure was what was mean't to be ...
Jan 2, 2013 -
Re: threads
First and foremost, just a little fun fact seeing as it's what brought me to review this work, I honestly find myself scanning through a lot of your old works ...
Jan 2, 2013 -
Re: Dreams
First and foremost, welcome to YWS! I don't think we've been formally introduced. I'm Dreamwalker but most people just call me Walker. You, of course, can call me whatever you ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Brand New Eyes
Walker here. I read this poem a couple times through, debating on whether or not I was going to review it simply due to the access of reviews you've already ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Old
You know, I'm honestly always impressed by your prose. I don't think I've ever had the chance to tell you that, seeing as the amount I've actually talked to you ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: An Unusual Trip
Walker here, as requested. Alright, so I don't know if you know this, but I'm a bit of a ranter, so you'll have to bear with me. The nit-picks and ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Mother Nature
Walker here, as requested. I'm going to be quite honest with you. As a person who both enjoys reading and writing poetry, I have a lot of difficulty really enjoying ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Sometimes when I miss you
I always liked the breaking up of a narrative poem through roman numerals. It always made the poem, as a whole, seem more clean-cut. Aesthetically pleasing, whether the substance be ...
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: gone
I must admit, you definitely have a way of playing with metaphor as a whole, seeing as you interweave them through this quite thoroughly, almost braggingly. This sort of 'look ...
Dec 28, 2012 -
Re: First Sonnet for My Grandmother
Walker here, as requested. I like the tone of this. The way the theme is lonesome and not overplayed when it comes to the melodrama of it all. Themes like ...
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: Labyrinth: Chapter One
You may have to bear with me on this one seeing as I haven't reviewed prose in quite some time now. I'm a wee bit rusty. Nonetheless, I'm here as ...
Dec 23, 2012
