Dreamwalker

Alright, so heres a pretty short little review. I didnt want to get into specifics too much cause I think you did well enough without me having to critique small ...

Alright well I think everyone else did fine jobs reviewing this pieve so I'll just basically so my overview. You have writing skills, I'll give you that, and are very ...

After reading this through a couple times, I realised there really is no way I could morally critique this piece. It was very sad and emotional to read and I ...

I disagree with the one statement about it being like twilight. Yes it does have a feel to it in a sense, but Twilight wasnt necessarily about a girl coming ...

Alright, a strong critique... hmm, well first I'll just simply put, this is fairly well written and very interesting to read about. From what I've read, the plot is pretty ...

alright, well at this moment in time i do not have a chance to fully critique this work so im just going to say what i thought XP sorry. well ...

alright here is my critique! I was a cool spring morning as Maria Jenkins and her 3-year-old daughter Lily made their way through the many teenage students that crowed the ...

Alrighttt, so this was a loaddd of confusion for the first while, but an interesting concept indeed. I did enjoy reading it and i do think you have quite the ...

alright, this wasnt too badly written. I quite enjoyed it and it was a nice simple read that was very cute and romantic. it was soft but had a nice ...

okay so this story was short and sweet, and i did like the idea of it. It was very romantic and cute and just basically speaking, i liked it very ...

This is a very coaxing poem. it was strangely and interestingly written, kind of making you think of things you thought not of before. I must say, its got quite ...

Emily This isn't what I want to be. This isn't how I want people to see myself. So many negative thoughts are swirling in my head while I'm trying to ...

I give you props for using so many amazing analogies and such, but the idea of the prolouge confuses me somewhat. I can somewhat understand the idea of it but ...

I actually found that poem very simple but beautiful. Some parts didnt clash to well and i could tell where you weakness was but for the most part is was ...

In poem format, its alright written. The stanza's would make more sense if they were the same amount of lines and such. In all honesty, and no this isnt supposed ...