Dreamwalker

Hello Kyllorac and welcome to YWS! My name is The.Dreamwalker although most just call me dreamwalker, and I'll be reviewing your work today! Okay so this bit was very cute. ...

This was very short, but very interesting. It was definitly something to look into, and the idea of the character is strange, sickening, and yet, truly awe inspiring. I give ...

Hello Pinkmunki95 and welcome to YWS. I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people call me dreamwalker or dreamy for short. I'll be reviewing your work :) Alright so first off, the critique ...

Hello hopelessromance00 and welcome to YWS. I'm The.Dreamwalker but people just call me dreamwalker or dreamy for short. I'll be reviewing your work! Okay so onto the critique! As hateful ...

Hello Dragnet. I'm The.Dreamwalker, but some call me dreamwalker or dreamy for short. I'll be reviewing your work! Okay so ontot the critique: Elizabeth sat down at her desk and ...

Hi Writewatiwant. I'm The.Dreamwalker, although some people call me just dreamwalker or dreamy, and I will be your reviewer for today. For this piece I'm going to make an exception ...

Hi peace-love-dream and welcome to YWS! I'm The.Dreamwalker, or Dreamwalker, or whatever people call me for short. Normally, I can write a fairly long and detailed critique toward a piece, ...

Hello KnightlyAngel09. I'm Dreamwalker and I'll be reviewing your work! Okay so first I'll give you a basic critique then give you some of my feedback on what was good ...

I found that the emotion bits and those descriptions were almost a little bit repetitive in a sense. It just kind of felt straightforward and you were lengthing it when ...

Alright I'm going to be completely and utterly honest with you and I dont want you taking offense to my words. I just thought it would be best to get ...

Hello Ceekayyy66x. I'm The.Dreamwalker and welcome to YWS. First though, I must ask before I critique this work, if you could please take the time to review at least two ...

Alright, this was a little strange, kinda interesting, but it is starting to have a Twilight feel. I dont want to be picky about it, but Kate, your character, sounds ...

Hello, I'm The.Dreamwalker and welcome to YWS but I'm just going to say this now for future reference. I'm sorry but if I cannot make it throught the first little ...

I'm going to have to say Interview with the Vampire. It wasn't even written that badly but it was so boring. Everything was so overly descriptive and wordy my mind ...

Alright, again I'm going to keep this breif and simple. I'm glad the descriptions werent so tiring! Thats a good start! It was much easier to catch onto then before ...