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Re: Viruses Vs. Spysweepers
One review as promised :) Okay so here it goes. With millions dead on both side, the public were never told how many had died anymore. Well, doesnt this sort ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Two
Hi Lucy :) It's Dreamwalker, supplying the review! Ah, you like harsh critiques :). Then I shall ablige the best I can, although I cant promise it will be as ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: A Devil's Promise (Introduction)
Hello Tifa13 and welcome to YWS :). I am The.Dreamwalker, reviewer extraoridinare ;) just kidding... but it's a pleasure to meet you and I'm here to review your work. Alright, ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: True Heir, Chapter 1
Hey aspiringyoungwriter! Welcome to YWS! I'm The.Dreamwalker, but most just call me dreamwalker, and its a pleasure to meet you. I'll be reviewing your work this find afternoon :) Okay ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Short Elf story
Hello! I'm The.Dreamwalker and it's a pleasure to meet you! Everyone seems to have done a well enough job reviewing your work so I'm just going to states some pros ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Cut Off
For this sort of poem, it truly should have been longer. From what you gave us, it didnt really seem at all like a poem in that sense. I could ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: Being me (Part 1)
Hello! I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker and I'll be reviewing your work this evening :) Before I start, I think it would be best if I ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Starlight Requiem {Chapter One}
Okay, so I read this piece and honestly, I`m only trying to be as helpful towards you as I possibly can, and I just dont feel that this story is ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
Very amusing ;) Although this was to short to really nit-pick or anything, I found that terribly hilarious. Probably because we all thought it we just didnt have the courage ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
You do realise that there are enough people who hate the book with a passion? Like me! :D Sorry, when you grow up with the vampire chronicles, the twilight series ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
That had to be one of the most epic scripts I have read on YWS yet! I definitly like the whole Twilight bashing, Harry Potter advocating feeling to this scripts ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Teddy Bear's Story
Okay so I'm not going to go full out critic right at this moment in time, but I will definitly fully review this work when I have some time on ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: To Society:
I really enjoyed this poem! It had a simple base, and rhymne scheme, and although it was a tad bit overdramatic I really enjoyed this bit. And I do disagree ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Vampire Vignettes
Hello Kyllor! I just have one thing to say before I write my critique, and that would be WOW! Honestly! This piece held such turmoil, your character in both bits ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: As if I was in Love Prologue
Hi pshhxhoney. I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker, and I'll be reviewing your work this afternoon :) Okay, so basically speaking, this work was very, very, very, ...
Mar 15, 2009
