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Re: Minos - chapter 1
Okay so I know you requested a review for chapter five, but in my rules, I state that I will review every chapter up till chapter five as well... so ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: All's My Fault
Whom did her eyes search, in this vast ocean of vagabonds? Travelers of desire wandering around. The more they walked. The more they were separated. Dreams were their destiny and, ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Smoke and Fire: One
Howdy, Tigersprite! I am horribly sorry this is so late D: Been busy with life and all that wonderfullness. Either way, truly sorry so I hope this review will be ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: The Hottest Day Of School For Brett
Hello there! Walker here with a review! Alright, so, my structures 'Nit-Picks' and my overall so, on with the show! Nit-Picks : Everyone was eying the clock on the creamy ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: A Discovery
Alright, Walker here with a review. Hopefully you don't mind critiquing on something already sent? :3 Nit-Picks : “What is going on Mum?” I yelled. Starting off a short story ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Come in
Oh dear lord. As a reviewer, I am at a lose for words xD. So, because of the fact that I read this over about six times and still can't ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Last
... Ripping things up... kind of my style ;D. By the way, hey there! I'm Walker and I'm here to review this piece for you. That being said, I have ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: To my Beloved
Howdy there! I'm Walker, here to review this lovely piece of fiction! Okay, so I'm going to slim this down to my general 'Nit-Picks' and my overall, if thats alright ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Year One Chapter 2: EDITED
Okay so its rather early in the morning and I still haven't downed at least three cups of coffee, so if this review isn't one of my better ones, sorry ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: The Violet Saga: Year One
Because you make me happy, Walker here with a patented review ;) That being said, this is my structure; Grammar and Punctuation/Nit-Picks, Setting and Description, Plot, Character Developement (my bes
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Two
Anddd I'm back :). Did yah miss me? I know I did xD. Either way, since I'm sure you know my structure now, I'm just going to jump right into ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Experiment - Preview
Howdy, Pteura! Walker here, as requested - though very sorry about this being late - and I just wanted to say that there sure was a lot going on in ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Liar Liar (1)
Howdy, Aubrey! Walker here, returning the favour as is in my nature ;) One thing you might want to know about my reviews is that I have a very strict ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One
Okay, Icy, so if you have never read my WRFF forum, you might want to know that I'm a bit obsessive compulsive. Which means that, unfortunately for what I had ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: What Time, Doth Tell.
Your imagery is beautiful, kid, But I will say that you should probably re-read this. There are blatant grammar and punctuations mistakes riddled through the entirety of this piece of ...
Apr 6, 2011