Dreamwalker

You're playing with words, which is nice to see in a young writer. Someone who is willing to use imagery and metaphor. Its a quality that most younger poets seem ...

cC, marry me. In other news, I liked this a lot more than I thought I was going to. A lot more than I probably would have bet myself over. ...

Pup has a point. There are ones willing to cultivate and there are ones willing to crush. If the name didn't symbolize where my stance is, you might take this ...

Rosey, Rosey, Rosey, you are my 300th review. That being said, this old instructor is cracking her knuckles and getting ready to crack this piece in half (if that's even ...

First off, lets be serious. On a presentation note, this is absolutely horrendous. Every word starting with capitals. You being substituted with 'U'. Its all rather... tacky and internet slangy ...

Alright so I'm going to give you a little advice on comparison essays, seeing as I'm a little late on getting to this review before you had to hand in ...

This has a gorgeous message! One in which we should all abide by, whether we're blessed with vision in both eyes, one eye, or no vision at all. After all, ...

First off, I can definitely tell why you put this is Lyric Poetry. Its got very lovely repetition, which is nice, and I love the way in which you took ...

I like this, probably more than I'll ever be able to express. That being said, I like the identity of this poem. The way that it gives the narrator or ...

You definitely have something to say, though this hardly feels like poetry. Maybe a spirited rant of some sort? In any case, think of the words you wrote. The image ...

Hello, Theoutsidersfreak! I'm Walker, here to take a look at this piece ^_^. I suppose I should warn you first and foremost that this is not going to be the ...

This is a sad but beautiful story. Unfortunately, as of right now, this is simply that. A beautiful story. A piece of poetry? I wouldn't rightly say so. That being ...

Okay so this is a strong subject matter to take on and one of which I wouldn't even if I wanted to. You would have been four around the time ...

Poetry. Yes. I can do poetry. Either way, Walker here with a review as requested! Thought I would give all three reviews in one fell swoop. In any case, lets ...

My first review may have come across as a little harsh. I can be seen like that sometimes so I hope you don't mind. This time, to make up for ...