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Re: The Last Words
Hello, Rysa! I'm Dreamwalker, but most people just call me Walker, and I'm here to review this today, if you don't mind! Now, what I realized from the start was ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Deva Diana Arlecchina
This is... well, structured, if anything. A very old-english style voice so the modern way in which you stylized the structure is kind of off-balanced. Now, I'm sure you don't ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Walking Home
Sorry, dear, but I'm going to have to agree entirely with Ol' Mustardy's critique. As you stated in your appraisal of his review (which should be done in PM's if ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Georgia
Alright, Pepper, I'm here for that review. And I'll try my best but, as we have already discovered over the past while, I'm dense as cardboard especially when I should ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: -2020
I like your spunk, kid. But, unfortunately, as much as this was quirky and... well, quite well planned out, I couldn't find myself getting past the fact that it was ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: One In The Mirror
Oy vey, my dear. Oy vey. I understand that this is the kind of topic that would inspire you and everyone around you, and the thought is such an admirable ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 94
Oh dear, this was quite the mouthful. Not that that's a bad thing, or anything like that! After all, it is flash-fiction and every word counts. Which makes me enjoy ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Like 98'
Ohhh Somi baby, this is an interesting piece indeed. You had me worried up till that very last stanza, dear. Worried that, though you are showing a very incredible talent ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Hurt Beyond Repair
Chanelle, dear, I realized this is your first post on the site and that having me as one of your first reviewers might be a bit of a downer, but ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Chalk Drawings
Audy, dear, you know I adore you. Really, I do. You're an absolute doll. Because of this, I'm sure you know what I'm going to say. This poem was a ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: To Mom
Congratulations. I'm in awe. That doesn't happen often. You did something remarkable here. Something truly extraordinary. I wonder how you did it, how you ever found the words. And I ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Nothing
When I read the 'unreliable narrator' all I could think of was Nick Carraway from the Great Gatsby, and Nelly from Wuthering Heights. In any case, a review is at ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: The Night
Ah, English class poetry. Its never the best kind seeing as there is always a prompt which takes away from the heart of it, but its still poetry nonetheless, so ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: That's What Love Is
Hey there, Potter! I'm Walker, here to review this piece. And I want to start off with the fact that I love how this slowly reveals itself for what it ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Perhaps I Am Onto Something...
In all honesty, its our generations way of thinking. Feeling unheard is something we all experience simply because now we all believe that we have something to say. When nobody ...
Oct 13, 2011
