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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Last Words

    Hello, Rysa! I'm Dreamwalker, but most people just call me Walker, and I'm here to review this today, if you don't mind! Now, what I realized from the start was ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deva Diana Arlecchina

    This is... well, structured, if anything. A very old-english style voice so the modern way in which you stylized the structure is kind of off-balanced. Now, I'm sure you don't ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Walking Home

    Sorry, dear, but I'm going to have to agree entirely with Ol' Mustardy's critique. As you stated in your appraisal of his review (which should be done in PM's if ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Georgia

    Alright, Pepper, I'm here for that review. And I'll try my best but, as we have already discovered over the past while, I'm dense as cardboard especially when I should ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: -2020

    I like your spunk, kid. But, unfortunately, as much as this was quirky and... well, quite well planned out, I couldn't find myself getting past the fact that it was ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: One In The Mirror

    Oy vey, my dear. Oy vey. I understand that this is the kind of topic that would inspire you and everyone around you, and the thought is such an admirable ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted 94

    Oh dear, this was quite the mouthful. Not that that's a bad thing, or anything like that! After all, it is flash-fiction and every word counts. Which makes me enjoy ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Like 98'

    Ohhh Somi baby, this is an interesting piece indeed. You had me worried up till that very last stanza, dear. Worried that, though you are showing a very incredible talent ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hurt Beyond Repair

    Chanelle, dear, I realized this is your first post on the site and that having me as one of your first reviewers might be a bit of a downer, but ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chalk Drawings

    Audy, dear, you know I adore you. Really, I do. You're an absolute doll. Because of this, I'm sure you know what I'm going to say. This poem was a ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To Mom

    Congratulations. I'm in awe. That doesn't happen often. You did something remarkable here. Something truly extraordinary. I wonder how you did it, how you ever found the words. And I ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Nothing

    When I read the 'unreliable narrator' all I could think of was Nick Carraway from the Great Gatsby, and Nelly from Wuthering Heights. In any case, a review is at ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Night

    Ah, English class poetry. Its never the best kind seeing as there is always a prompt which takes away from the heart of it, but its still poetry nonetheless, so ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That's What Love Is

    Hey there, Potter! I'm Walker, here to review this piece. And I want to start off with the fact that I love how this slowly reveals itself for what it ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Perhaps I Am Onto Something...

    In all honesty, its our generations way of thinking. Feeling unheard is something we all experience simply because now we all believe that we have something to say. When nobody ...

    Oct 13, 2011


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