Dreamwalker

Hello, dear! You've written a rather interesting poem here. Free-versed as it is, it still holds onto that certain amount of basic structure to keep it in line and the ...

Lumi darling, my love for you burns with the fiery intensity of Charizard's sacred fire. Unsurprisingly, such love stretches out to this rather dark piece. But enough about that! Anyways, ...

I never ended up getting to that other review. Which I feel awful about. So I might end up doing that today at some point in time. Anyways, off the ...

It's nice to see a double-faceted poem, hun. Really, quite refreshing. Jumping into the heart of something is generally the easiest way, but poetry should be fluid. It rarely ever ...

Walker here, as requested. Now, love, this poem is very emotional. I don't know if it speaks on a deeper level for yourself or just the passion the moment enveloped ...

Ironically, I read through this earlier this morning. Good thing too as I need a bit of perspective on this one. I actually really liked this poem. Probably a lot ...

And maybe you've twisted a subject into a tight knot that could circle on immensely. Which makes for wonderful poetry. I read this through a couple times and, at points, ...

You are insanely interesting. The poetry is one thing, of course, but the voice the poetry is carrying through is something distinctly you, and distinctly of it's own variety or ...

This kind of reminds me of a children's book. The rhyme scheme, for instance, or the way each stanza is explaining a facet of something without really having all that ...

You know, I see very little in this poem, and yet I see quite a bit as well, which is odd. Sort of a mixture of 'oh, interesting, but where ...

Oh my lovely Snoinker and her lovely poetry ;). Anyways, a review from me to you should have been done weeks ago and I just never got around to doing ...

I'm going to keep this short due to the fact that my criticism will come at a later time. This is going to sound probably a little rude, so I ...

This had a very Shel Silverstein feel to it! So quick and flowey and cute. The kind of poem I would have devoured whole in my younger years simply for ...

I see what you did there ;). Anyways, this intrigued me mostly because of the description you chose for it. I realize that might seem silly but some people love ...

This was a definite back and forth in my books. First and foremost, I want to note on that first stanza because its that stanza that made this sort of ...