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Hey Dreamer here for a review. Happy Review Day! I love this poem I can literally feel the need of the chase. Personally as a writer of stories I think ...

Hey Dreamer here for a review. I'm going to review as I go so I don't forget things along the way. here goes.... I love your first paragraph it has ...

Happy Review day Dreamer here for a review. First off wow I loved this poem. I didn't think it made a lot of sense but at the same time it ...

Hey Dreamer here for a review. First off I would like to say amazing. I loved this short. I wouldn't call it a general story it kinda has a Mystery/Supense ...

I really enjoyed this chapter. Sadly I haven't had time to read the previous ones so some parts were a little confusing for me. But no matter it was a ...

Dreamer here for a review. I really enjoyed this story. (personally I would have accepted someone for that kind of essay....very descriptive). I totally agree with what Blackwood said. English ...

Dreamer here. Love your avatar by the way. now for the review...I loved this chapter of the story it was very descriptive. I don't know what chapter this is because ...

Wow this is a really great prologue. It really makes me want to continue reading into the story. The only thing I would change is how you frase it. If ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I'm not all that familiar with types of poems so forgive me if I get something wrong. I could tell that the mother is a ...

I really enjoyed this chapter. I haven't read any of the others yet but just by this one I suspect that he is a vampire :) . In the beginning ...

I agree with Bugslake. The only grammatical errors I found were that some words were incomplete. I get the feeling that this main character has anger issues and that keeps ...

I really liked this "lost chapter" from the book. To me it seemed as though you were revising as you went? I saw a few spelling mistakes (but those are ...

I really think that you have a wonderful story here. I don't really like all the diolouge. It kinda makes me want to lose interest in the story itself. Really ...

I really love this I didn't get to read the first chapters yet but I promise I will sooner or later. My only thought on fixing things is you need ...

Wow you have a really great story here. From the way the girl is saying there is a chief I get the feeling that she is native american or from ...