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Re: Fallen
Heyo Dreamer stoppin' in for a review. (It's been a while since I've done one so excuse me if I do it poorly) Here goes...alright you have a nice plot ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1
Hello, Dreamer here for a review...Okay let's start. The chapter was good, very descriptive. In the begining I was a little confused. If Angel and Lisa both know there is ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Crime and Punishment
Hello there :) I really liked your story. I do agree with @kevin25a you could continue it if you want. The only things I found wrong is that in the ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Dead Letters - Chapter 1
Hello :) great chapter :) I had noticed a few spelling errors throughout the piece. The thing is you put the genre as like dramatic and the likes but it ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels
Dreamer here for a review, WOW that almost made me cry I saw every inch of the poem perfectly and it had so much feeling and meaning to it. It ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Strength
Hello Dreamer here for a review. First off I would like to say that this tittle really fit well for the poem. :) so anyway I loved this poem it ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Consequences of an Unreasonable Pursuit
Alright....Dreamer here for a review, you have a very great narrative here...but I for one wouldn't consider it a narrative. It just doesn't strike me as one. I really enjoyed ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Devil Touch - Prologue
Hey Dreamer here for a review. At first I thought it was a little weird that you started off that way but it made me totally want to read more. ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: Relapse
Hey again Dreamer here for a review. :) So I was reading through the comments and I have to totally agree with both @Delirium and @Maximilia. I think that this ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: People are Towers
Hey Dreamer here for a review. :) I liked the poem it was good but I thought there could be more. It is so short that people have no time ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: Music To My Ears, Page 14-28
Hey Dreamer here for a review! :) I didn't get to read all of it because scripts aren't my area of expertise. I really think that you probably did a ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Paying a Debt Chapter 1
Hey Dreamer here for a review. Alright to start of you have a very good idea going for from what I have read. I didn't read all of it because ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Fences (prologue)
Hey Dreamer here for a review. I really enjoyed your prologue. I only found 1 misspelling and that was when the soldier started to speak. Instead of saying "here" you ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Erosion of a Wednesday
Hey Dreamer here for a review! I really liked this poem I thought it was very powerful. I like the description and the imagery put in it, that is what ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Priorities
Hey dreamer here for a review! :) I will start out saying that I enjoyed this poem. I don't really know what you mean when you named it priorities and ...
Feb 23, 2014