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Hi,buddy.This is a very interesting story! Indeed,so creative ;) Keep it up!

XD!!

My pleasure,young lad' :D

My gosh,I am not mean to be rude here.But that was what you said; I got a dreaded phone call saying my Granny died due to a gun shot wound.Don't ...

I start to think about sonnet poetry :D Thanks for the link!

Thanks for explanation!I understand about it.I faced with these problems too!

Thanks^^-->I will fix it soon!

XD.I need to understand everything when I read.Can't let it pass in my mind just like that^^,sorry :D

It will be quiet confusing here,but I talk about god^^. Not sure about the twisted past-present tense^^.Yes,you help me a lot,thanks for review!

Well,thanks for the explanation! :D

Thanks High Top!I will fix the problems soon.You really help me buds^^

Hello ajruby12,just wanted to say here,I love this poem.Well because I hate Math;).I will back soon for reviewing this nice poem during review day!

Owh need to say sorry here.Now I know the reason so I think it does make sense to me now :D

Thanks :) Really appreciate it.I will try to fix some.

Thanks for review!