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Re: This is a Test
Hi defyingravity01,have a good day!So here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I like the concept here,the theme and the messages to want to convey to ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Real American Woman, ch. 6
Hello AyumiGosu17,so he is Dark again to review on your novel(story chapter 6) I really like the whole part of your story here because you know how to use the ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Great Pokemon Adentures! Chapter 3:The Magenta Archipelago
Hello Pokemonlover545,I enjoyed reading this story so seems you truly a fans of the Pokemon series. And I really enjoy watching this series on TV. :) Straight to the point ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: operation imperial ch-15
Hi rishabh,have a good day!Here is Dark to give review on your novel(story chapter 15) Not much to say,because I like how your story going through here.But let me give ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Rings of Rhea - Part 1.7
Hi ,so here is Dark to give review on your story. I like to read the your novel that have good structured plot here.Your writing style is also satisfactory and ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Prophecy Ch. 8
Hi sarahnsnow,have a good here is Dark to give review on your story. Long story here! But I am satisfied when reading it.Actually, in my opinion, the details of the ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: story thang part 2
Hi blacknwhiteeagle100,have a good day!Here is Dark to give review on your story! I like your story look quite creepy and full of mystery. So it goes to say that ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Four "Super Freaks"
Hello RobbieFava,have a good day!So here is Dark to give review on your script-story ! I like your script that organized and easy to understand here.I only know a little ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Real American Woman, ch. 7
Hi AyumiGosu17,have a good here is Dark to give review on your story. This is my first comment on a story, I always focused on the poetry. But it seems ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Forget Me Not
Hi Sarrasponda,here is Dark to give review on your poem. I'm comfortable with the style of your writing here in this love-themed is no exaggeration with the expressions of feeling, ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: Lovely Bones
Hi xDarkHeart27x,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. A is for Anorexia - Lovely Bones So I think this is a very interesting poem here when you ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: In Debt
Hi Hannah!So here is Dark to give review on your poem. Actually I quite doubt with the theme of this poem.Could it about your life experience with the tragedy? Years ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: caskets without funerals
My house is a casket without a funeral-->Really caught my attention here is Dark to give review on your poem! First of all, #I flick my wrist to the corners ...
Sep 20, 2013 -
Re: Unexpected
Hi lyricalrebel,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. It seems you certainly enjoy to write poems on love theme.I was wondering, if you are also able to ...
Sep 20, 2013 -
Re: The Beast
Hi defyingravity01,so here is Dark to give review on your poem! I love the concept here although it is quite puzzling here; # He says he cares about you. He ...
Sep 20, 2013