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Re: "Abandoned" Part 2
Hi Sleeplessend, again Dream with review on your poem. I like the idea that you convey in the poem. It seems that it is different from the first part which ...
Oct 21, 2013 -
Re: Empty Spaces
Hi vitamere, have a good day! Dream here with a quick review on your poem. The implied meaning in the poem certainly need a sharp scrutiny. Perhaps with the help ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: "Abandoned" Part 1
Hi Sleeplessend, Dream with quick review on your poem. Your poem have a connotation meanings and some are easy to understand. I like how you use the imagery with the ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: Her
Hi Bellator, Dream with quick review on your poem. Very interesting poem to read but honestly I'm kinda confuse with 'her'. You makes me wonder who actually 'her' is refer ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: Oblivious
Hi aqua, Dream with review on your poem. You poem is easy to understand and shows a direct meaning in narrative form. You also use some imagery( word pictures ) ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: sometimes
Hi marwa, have a good day! Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, your poem have denotation and also connotation meanings implied within your poem. Some lines ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: Old Roads
Hi Killyouwithwords, Dream here with a quick review on your poem. The old memories in the past are the memories that have meaning for us. 'The Old Roads', gives a ...
Oct 19, 2013 -
Re: YWS
Messenger..This is very heartwarming! But this piece of writing is more of a thank you note to @Nate, who was so awesomely cool in creating it. Agreed. He's a genius ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: As You Leave
Hi aouther2b, Dream here with quick review on your poem. Your poem is quite sad when it ended with unpleasant things. You're talking about the shattered lady who left by ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Black and White
Hi lovethelifeulive, have a good day! Well Dream here with review on your poem. Things that I like about your poem is the feelings that you have provided inside are ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Deep Down
Hi fortis, you're my favorite poet(ess). You cursed me again with your latest poem. Your poem is truly unique in terms of thoughts and writing to explain the reality with ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Drowning
Hi Daring, have a good day! I enjoy your writing style. It was short but diction used is accurate and interesting. Just a few thing here is that you need ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Absence
Hi polkadottiger2, again Dream with review on your poem :) This is a narrative poem with details on him. A guy who approached you but disappear/gone suddenly. I really like ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Emotion
Hi polkadottiger2,have a good day! Talking about emotions is an spacious thought and can be viewed from various aspects. Through the poem, you define emotion as something terrible but wonderful. ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: "Dont Go"
Hi Sleeplessend, have a good day! Dream with review on your wonderful poem. The first thing I see when reading your poem is that it requires some punctuation to make ...
Oct 15, 2013
