Dragongirl

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! I am so grateful for the tips with the grammar! Glad you laughed! :)

As always your review was so helpful. I know I am messing up on a lot of dialogue grammar but I am trying it just really confuses me. Not sure ...

Hey, thanks for the review. It's always great to get feedback. I will right and tighten up my writing a bit. Thank you for the tips! -DG

Zeus, I love your reviews! Finding my own grammar mistakes has always been super hard for me. Having someone take as much time as you to point them out is ...

Thanks so much for the detailed and well thought review. Means a lot. You're seriously awesome.

Of course not! It is extremely helpful to have people point out that kind of stuff to me. Thanks again!

Thanks for the straight forward and honest review. This is a first draft but that isn't me making excuses. Looking over my work I would have to agree with nearly ...

It the truth! :p

Thanks for the totally awesome a detailed review! Good catch with the not being able to see the Changed. There is a reason for that but with this only being ...

Sure thing! Have a great day and let me know if you want the next chapter reviewed!

Hahaha, thanks. I am happy to hear you found it terrifying.... BOO!!!

Hey, looking over my review I notice it had a ton of typos in it, making it totally confusing! Sorry about that. I tried to fix it. :) Again, my ...

Thanks buckets for the review, it tickles me pink that you liked the story.

Thanks for the review, I am glad you enjoyed the story.

Thanks for the awesome and helpful review. As soon as review day is over I will be applying a lot of your suggestions.