Dragongirl

Interesting... I like the idea you have here. An unique way of capturing the battles we face with in ourselves. The most captivating thing about this poem is the fact ...

I like the idea, science stripping a way magic almost as if it were it's own kind of dark magic. I don't think it was a wonderful idea for a ...

Whaaaaaaaa????? That's what I think after reading this. You have got skills, you weave words together in such a way that I have to follow the strand your thoughts have ...

This is good. It has real beauty in it and I love the imperfections of your characters melting into something right. Something unbroken. You have captured something magical with this ...

Hmmm, interesting. The role reversal is a different twist, however the piece feels a little incomplete. I don't know how to say this nicely, but it doesn't have a ton ...

Yo C.C., Nice chapter. Since you have the second chapter up I figured I would just review this one rather than you first. Hope that is ok. :) Number one, ...

Hey, I guess I better review this as it is pretty good, plus I actually know you so if I don't you could possible give me a glare in person ...

Riveting is the word I would use to describe this piece. I was on the edge of my seat the whole. The terror of the boy was written in a ...

Chuckles... My mind just fried a bit. :) Seriously though, this was good. I found my self nodding my head one moment in agreement before finding myself utterly flabbergasted in ...

Well I am curious to see where you are going with this story. I know that I've said this before but I don't especially care for the drinking or cursing ...

Hey there, I liked this. I don't care for a whole lot of swearing in stuff I read because I don't curse and reading a story that has people spitting ...

Hey girl, So I just want to say that I thought this was pretty good. I read the first chapter as well and I must say that you hve me ...

Hey, I enjoyed this. I don't think there is much I could say that would make this better. I liked the new characters you introduced this chapter. That is something ...

Hello R, Dragongirl here as requested. So let me start out by saying this is very good. The emotion of this piece really comes through and the reader can feel ...

Alright, I'm here as requested. Since you said you don't really want me to review your grammer, sentence structure or anything like that, I will try to focse mainly on ...